Red Ranger 1 Posted February 15, 2016 Report Posted February 15, 2016 Loved all the family interaction and bickering. Quote
Inactive User Posted February 15, 2016 Report Posted February 15, 2016 Great chapter Loved the family interaction and glad they are having fun Update soon please xx Quote
JosieTash Posted February 15, 2016 Report Posted February 15, 2016 (edited) oh the joys of camping.  Darcy's comments about April and her ways [bugs happen etc] were fuuny  ADORED this ,.....  "I love toasted marshmallows more than I love you," April said to Heath with a mouthful of marshmallow. "You would leave me for a marshmallow?" Heath asked as he pulled his out of the fire, his was way overcooked in April's opinion. April nodded as she grabbed another marshmallow off of Darcy and put on the end of her stick and stuck it in the fire. "If toasted marshmallows were human, yeah," Edited February 15, 2016 by JosieTash Quote
Ludub Posted February 15, 2016 Report Posted February 15, 2016 Great chapter!  You paint a really beautiful picture of Heath and April's relationship. I also love the bickering between him and Darcy. Very well written. Looking forward to the next update Quote
Guest Posted February 18, 2016 Report Posted February 18, 2016 Great chapter. Glad the camping trip went well. I do hope Casey will be alright. I look forward to more. Update again soon  Quote
Ludub Posted February 18, 2016 Report Posted February 18, 2016 Great chapter, hope Casey's going to be ok. I liked the insight into Heath's childhood. I always thought he was someone who had to pretend to be tough all his life but really could have just used a hug. Looking forward to the next update :-) Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 18, 2016 Report Posted February 18, 2016 Wow at what happened to Casey at the end.Lots of good interaction between the characters again, you're characterising them all well especially Heath and Darcy. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 18, 2016 Report Posted February 18, 2016 (edited) WOAH !!! about Casey. Hope things will be ok.  Darcy sure is being an annoying pretty typical teen right now  And hey, it's only been less than a week tween updates. i remember you saying they would be less frequent now that you are back at school [same deal with my current fic, except i'm now back at work]  Edited February 18, 2016 by JosieTash Quote
Inactive User Posted February 18, 2016 Report Posted February 18, 2016 Great chapter Poor Casey! Hope he will be okay! Update soon please xx Quote
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