KittCatt Posted March 9, 2016 Report Posted March 9, 2016 Great Chapter! Liked how Josh managed to get everything of his chest to Mark. Unfortunate that Mark couldn't provide much help. Maybe he should see someone who specializes in anxiety. But i think talking about what has happened has helped Josh, at least to some extent. Andy is continuing to step up and provide great support, even if it makes Josh uncomfortable. Good that he noticed a difference in medication. Likewise, i think Tank is responsible. Andy should tell Kat and Nate this, because i don't believe that the pharmacist is responsible. Also hope Josh's kidney's don't fail. More side effects from the wrong medication are the last thing he needs. Once again great writing, update soon 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 10, 2016 Report Posted March 10, 2016 Great chapter Liked how Josh opened up to Mark and got everything off his chest Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 10, 2016 Report Posted March 10, 2016 Great chapter Good Josh opened up to Mark. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
KittCatt Posted March 10, 2016 Report Posted March 10, 2016 Great Chapter! Glad Josh will have no lasting physical damage from the medication mix up. Maybe Andy should tell the cops what he thinks Tank has done. Wonder what Tank is building... Nice scene at the end with Josh and Evie. Great to see her continuing to support him and glad he was able to find the strength to face her. Sad but true that love isn't enough sometimes. Feel sorry for both of them. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 10, 2016 Report Posted March 10, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Glad Josh wasn't seriously affected from the medication mixup. Liked the bit with Josh and Evie at the end. I look forward to more Update again Soon Edited March 10, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Guest Posted March 12, 2016 Report Posted March 12, 2016 Great chapter Poor Josh it's good Evelyn covered up her tattoo. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
KittCatt Posted March 12, 2016 Report Posted March 12, 2016 Great Chapter Liked how Evie covered her tattoo. It's understandable she would do so considering what Tank has done. Liked what she covered it with too. But i also understand Josh's point of view. Tank seems to be a third party in their relationship, and considering Josh forgot she even had the tattoo maybe she shouldn't have told him. I like how she wanted to do something that would make him happy though, even if it had the opposite effect. Feel sorry for both of them. One step forward two steps back it seems. Oh dear the cops really need to find Tank as soon as possible... Once again great writing, update soon 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted March 13, 2016 Report Posted March 13, 2016 Great Chapter! Not too good that the cops seem to be jumping to conclusions that Tank is in the city. The city isn't that far away either. Kat believing the opinions of Josh's loved ones (particularly Andy- who she seems to maybe have a crush on... ) over Josh's own credibility isn't great, because as Detective Carson said it put multiple lives in danger and the investigation behind. But she should learn from her mistake, and base her judgments from multiple sources, no matter how believable the statement is or isn't. Still very sad that Josh is so depressed and thinks everyone would be better off if he had died. Very powerful writing, with his inner torment about the way people are treating him, while his physical and mental ability to try to overcome this, stand up for himself and take control of his own life is not great. Poor Josh. Tank continues to be more than creepy. Wonder who the new girl was. Think things are about to get a whole lot worse for everyone... Look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 13, 2016 Report Posted March 13, 2016 Great chapter The cops think Tank's in the city. Poor Josh still feeling all depressed. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
Guest Posted March 13, 2016 Report Posted March 13, 2016 Great chapter Glad Tamara decided to tell Josh the truth. I wonder what Tank has planned I hope Andy or Kyle will get home in time. I look forward to more update again soon Quote
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