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Great chapter 

I felt sorry  for Tamara.

i'm glad Kat did find something to support Josh's story.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

 

Posted

Great Chapter

Glad Tamara's surgery seemed to work. Like that her sight didn't just magically come back good as new. The eyes and the brain need time to adjust to new sensory information. Hope it gets better gradually. Also really like how Kyle is supporting her.

Glad Kat found some evidence. I know she didn't believe him when he spoke to her earlier but i thought any good police officer would survey the surroundings for signs of forced entry at the first call. At least josh can be reassured now people believe him. Glad Andy feels a little guilty. If he wasn't so quick to judge perhaps Kat may have found evidence sooner. Interested to hear how Evie feels about this too.

Look forward to more, update soon :P

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Posted

Great chapter 

Glad everyone is supporting Josh.

I hope the police catch Tank.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

Posted

Great Chapter!

Finally everyone believes Josh and Kat's getting somewhere in finding Tank. Amazing writing once again. You have the ability to capture whats going on in Josh's head perfectly, as well as other characters like Evie. Completely in character. Great but really sad scene where Josh starts laughing and sobbing. Also when Josh forgave Evie for not believing him. You have great understanding of the characters.

Hope Greg is okay, hope they find Tank soon and Josh begins to feel safer now people believe him and he knows who is responsible. Though of course still not being able to see would be frightening. 

Look forward to more :P

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Posted

Great chapter 

Tank is really creepy.

I hope the police catch him soon.

Enjoyed the family outing on the beach.

I look forward to more

update again soon :)

 

Posted

Great Chapter!

Geez Tank is creepy. Actually not just creepy he looks to be sociopathic. Poor Greg, hope the police find him in time. Hope Kat doesn't feel too guilty, but if she had relied on Josh's story instead of his loved ones the cops may have found them by now.

Like how Josh wanted to go to the beach to retain some sense of normality in his life. Loved the beach scene, along with Kyle and Andy worrying. But Tamara is right, they should let him have some fun and be there for Josh when he needs it.

Once again great job, update soon :P

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Great Chapter!

Glad the cops found Greg, hope he will make it. Hope they find Tank too but at the moment it seems unlikely, he could be anywhere. Glad a car is going to be stationed outside the house. Though whether the car is there or not probably makes no difference to Josh. At the moment he has sort of resided to the fact that if he is being targeted there's nothing he can do about it, which is probably unhealthy but in character and understandable.

Liked how everyone is continuing to support Josh by doing what he wants; acting normally. The barbecue was a great idea.

Also wonder how long Tamara is going to continue telling everyone there has been no change.Even though her eyesight is very far from perfect at the moment, i wonder how Josh would react.

Look forward to more, update soon :P 

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