Guest Posted March 1, 2016 Report Posted March 1, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Glad the cops found Greg hope he makes it. Hope they find Tank soon. Glad everyone supported Josh. I look forward to more Update again soon Edited March 1, 2016 by Kristen Quote
Inactive User Posted March 2, 2016 Report Posted March 2, 2016 Great chapter Glad Greg was found but hopefully he will make it Hoping they do find Tank Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 2, 2016 Report Posted March 2, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Josh's nightmare was terrifying poor Evie glad Evie was so forgiven I know I wouldn't be if my boyfriend accidentally struggled me in my sleep. I look forward to me. Update again soon Edited March 2, 2016 by Kristen Quote
KittCatt Posted March 3, 2016 Report Posted March 3, 2016 Wow.. great chapter! Left me a bit speechless Once again great writing. I particularly like the first paragraph, just the way its been written is simple but so powerful . 'Everything he knew was in this moment, pure and simple existence, with no past and no future'- thought this line was great. The nightmare scene with Tank really set the scene for the utter turmoil that was to come. Now onto his nightmare.. it must have been so frightening for both Josh and Evie. The realization that you are strangling your girlfriend while your sleeping. I can't imagine. And the realization for Evie that your boyfriend is nearly killing you, and her being nearly powerless to stop him due to his ability to physically overpower her so easily, especially in the state he is in. Very well written. It's now going to be an even longer road to recovery for Josh. He wouldn't, and Evie wouldn't trust him to sleep beside her anymore. Psychopathology medication would help, along with continued talks with a psychologist, for both Evie and Josh probably. It shows the strength of her character that she is able to let Josh know herself that she is physically okay (as okay as she can be) because she knows he would never mean to harm her on purpose. Except now he has (even accidentally) and it will be a long road for them to be able to regain trust in their relationship. Also really like Andy supporting them both. It will be interesting to see what happens once Evie returns. Also wonder how everyone else will react. Zac, understandably not well but i hope they show compassion and support. Great job, one of the most shocking chapters in this fanfic, i look forward to more. Update soon 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 3, 2016 Report Posted March 3, 2016 Great chapter Whoa! Liked how you written Josh's nightmare so well! Poor Evelyn! Josh didn't meant to hurt her. I wonder how everyone will react to Evelyn's injures. Hoping they will understand why and how it happened... You are a good writer! You should get a award for your amazing story, lol! 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 4, 2016 Report Posted March 4, 2016 Great chapter Glad Kyle is helping Tamara slowly get use go being able to see again. Liked Leah and Zac being the worried parents. Evelyn should tell Oscar it was an accident Josh didn't mean to hurt her. I look forward to more. Update again soon Quote
KittCatt Posted March 4, 2016 Report Posted March 4, 2016 Great Chapter! Cute scene with Kyle and Tamara, glad her vision is gradually getting better. I wouldn't want to tell Josh right now either. That might make him give up completely and think it may have been better if he had died, instead of this misery and pain he and his loved ones are experiencing. Even though none of this is his fault, if he had died none of this would be happening, and this realization for Josh may be too much. Great understanding of Evie. She shows maturity when she knows she wouldn't be able to share a bed with Josh but she knows she has to be there for him. Like Zac and Leah's role. Hope Oscar won't be too angry with Josh though it would make sense that he would be. I think both Evie and Josh need to see a counselor/psychologist. It's not going to be easy to move forward for either of them, especially if they both can't get any sleep. As always, great writing, update soon 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 4, 2016 Report Posted March 4, 2016 Awesome chapter Loved the cute scene with Kyle and Tamara I hope Oscar will understand if Evelyn does tell him Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 5, 2016 Report Posted March 5, 2016 Great chapter Whoa at the ending! Poor Josh! I feel sorry for him and Evelyn I hope John will understand why his living room was smashed up Update soon please xx 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted March 5, 2016 Report Posted March 5, 2016 Great chapter! Understandable that Oscar was so angry. Glad once he saw Josh he was a bit more understandable. Once again Evie shows great strength as she tries to comfort Josh. So sad that he has had to make that decision to spend some time away from Evie, for her sake because he doesn't trust himself to be around her. Feel so sorry for both of them. Great writing once again. True that Tank still has control over him even though he is not physically there. Now the one person he felt comfort from is gone. I wonder where they both go from here, whether they will sink in despair or try to move on with their lives. Loved Kyle's role in this chapter. The ending was very powerful. Glad Kyle's getting Andy, he is probably the only one who could help him now. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
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