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Great start

Glad Brax was more understanding then Heath.

Good Mr Stewart let Casey stay at the caravan park.

I look forward to more

Update again soon :)

 

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Great start to this story!

Loved the Braxton boys' reactions. I thought they were very true to character. Heath making fun of Casey was very believable. It's also understandable that Brax would be upset to lose Casey from the house, not just because he's losing control of him but probably because he'd be feeling a little bit of empty nest syndrome too. Brax has basically been the dad in their relationship, so Casey wanting to fly the nest and have his independence would be hard on him. I liked that he was accepting in the end though.

Looking forward to seeing where you take this. x

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Great chapter

Glad Sasha helped Casey get a job at the diner.

Liked the short but sweet goodbyes.

I look forward to more 

update again soon :)

 

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