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1 hour ago, Ludub said:

Vinnie was played by Ryan Kwanten (Jason Stackhouse in True Blood :wub:). I think he got sent to prison for something he didn't do,and wasn't even there for VJ's birth. He was supposed to have died in prison but then they find out years and years later that he's actually been in witness protection (and then he gets killed by a tractor or something!) Think Dan was his dad for most of his early years. :-)

Vinnie was there for VJ's birth back in the 2001 finale and then he was arrested at the hospital moments later after his son was born. I remember watching this episode :)

BraxandCharlie4Ever, wow I love your fanfiction! :) I had been catching up with the last few chapters. It's really good! Am looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

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3 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Vinnie was there for VJ's birth back in the 2001 finale and then he was arrested at the hospital moments later after his son was born. I remember watching this episode :)

BraxandCharlie4Ever, wow I love your fanfiction! :) I had been catching up with the last few chapters. It's really good! Am looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

I was like 6 or 7 then, it's okay in this it'll be different. Dan will be father, but thank you for the info! :D

Thank you! :wub: That means a lot! 

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35 minutes ago, Kristen said:

Great chapter.

Wow some tension between Ryan and VJ.

I look forward to more

update again soon soon :)

 

Figured it can't be all sweet sailing for 'brothers' at the most part to be all happy to see each other after all this time. 

Thank you for reading. :wub:

 

 

29 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great chapter

Whoa at the tension between VJ and Ryan

I do hope Peter won't figure it out that it was Hunter who lit the fire

Update soon please xx

 

I haven't fully figured out, if he will figure it out. I'm still trying to see how this can naturally progress to what I have planned. 

Thanks for reading! :wub:

 

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Great chapter! Well done! :P

Loved VJ in this. I can understand how he feels about things. He has a right to feel hurt. 

Dialogue was very well written and flowed very naturally. 

Hope Peter doesn't mess things up for Hunter now that things have all settled down for the family.

Again, lovely to see Zac and Leah so loved up.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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