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Exciting chapter! Hope Zac will be okay and they dont hurt him too much. I'll be interested to find out who the kidnapper is. 

I always loved Colleen ;-) I've missed her, if only for her "Constable Risotto" and "hanging with your homos" ("eh Colleen, I think you mean homeboys!") type comments. She got some of the best lines. She was always a bit of light comedy.The show is missing someone like that at the moment. That said, I'm not sure that she's who you want flitting about when there's a crisis. She was always pretty self-absorbed from what I remember! 

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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2 minutes ago, Ludub said:

Exciting chapter! Hope Zac will be okay and they dont hurt him too much. I'll be interested to find out who the kidnapper is. 

I always loved Colleen ;-) I've missed her, if only for her "Constable Risotto" and "hanging with your homos" ("eh Colleen, I think you mean homeboys!") type comments. She got some of the best lines. She was always a bit of light comedy.The show is missing someone like that at the moment. That said, I'm not sure that she's who you want flitting about when there's a crisis. She was always pretty self-absorbed from what I remember! 

Looking forward to the next chapter.

That's why I've only brought her in for a fleeting visit, I don't think I'll be having her stay

I have a good idea for who the person is, but it'll be an OOC character. :unsure:

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Had been catching up with the last two chapters :)

Loved how Ricky stood up for Zac and Leah

Didn't like how how Peter ruined Zac and Leah's date

Oh dear! Can't believe Peter paid someone to kidnap Zac!

Wondering what Leah is going to do next...??

Looking forwards to the next chapter

P.S. Um... *clears throat* It would meant a lot to me if you can check out my 9th fanfiction 'Life At Summer Bay please? :) Thank you Xxx

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1 minute ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Had been catching up with the last two chapters :)

Loved how Ricky stood up for Zac and Leah

Didn't like how how Peter ruined Zac and Leah's date

Oh dear! Can't believe Peter paid someone to kidnap Zac!

Wondering what Leah is going to do next...??

Looking forwards to the next chapter

P.S. Um... *clears throat* It would meant a lot to me if you can check out my 9th fanfiction 'Life At Summer Bay please? :) Thank you Xxx

I've started to read it earlier, I'm loving it so far! My attention span is all over the place at the moment. 

Leah's going to go crazy with worry. I haven't figured out if and/or when she'll go to the cops. 

Well I'm gonna be writing the next chapter now. Just thought I'd reply and let you now, I've been reading your story when I catch up I'll definitely comment (I'll finish reading tomorow!) :wub:

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Great chapter 

liked the twist that Tank was Peter's contact .

I hope Zac will be returned home safely and Tank won't carry out his threat if Kat gets involved since she's a cop.

I look forward to more.

Update again soon :)

 

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2 hours ago, kathrine french said:

Zac need to let go peter is bad in this does he still hobour feeling for Leah  hope Zac is going be ok

I never thought of him still harboring feelings for Leah, that is an interesting twist.

6 hours ago, Ludub said:

Great chapter!

Poor Zac and poor Leah :-( Liked the twist with it being Tank. Wonder what damage he's done?

Looking forward to the next chapter. x

I know, he has done some damage, pretty much gonna give Leah a shock. 

I am debating Kat being involved when she gets the first demand.. 

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