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Great chapter!

Like that Skye and Oscar seem to have had a natural date with things moving slowly. Also like that Skye has Olivia to confide in. Olivia being with VJ is interesting.

Things are still a little awkward between Oscar and Maddy but I'm glad they are still friends. Nice mention that Matt's a little older than the rest of them, i often forget that.

I look forward to seeing whats to come :P

Posted

Great chapter.

Really liked the chat between Olivia and Skye.

Like the idea of VJ and Olivia as a couple.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon :)

 

Posted

:huh: Maddy pregnant, and could be Oscar's. Now this is interesting! 

Just caught up with this story. 

Olivia with VJ, that is definitely an interesting pairing. 

I like Oscar and Skye! They're neat. 

Love it. 

Please update again soon. :D 

Posted

Great Chapter!

Continue to like Oscar and Skye. They work together very well and the kissing was very sweet :P

Surprised that Maddy is pregnant. And she isn't 100% sure who the father is.. I wonder if she will be honest with Oscar, though this might jeopardize his new relationship with Skye.

I look forward to more, update soon :P

Posted

Loved it when Oscar said let;s go crazy with the bus to yabby creek thing !!!

 

Had a feeling that Mads was preggy. That could, obviously, REALLY complicate thibgs if the child is Oscar's.

 

The bowling date was really cooool, and i can sooo get that the idea of wanting to "live" at the beach.

 

LOOOVING this !!!

Posted

Oscar plucks up the courage to get together with Skye and Maddy might be having his baby? Quite bad luck for Oscar there.

Look forward to the next one

Posted (edited)

Great chapter 

Liked Oscar's idea of going crazy in yabbie creek.

Surprised Maddy's pregnant but unsure who the father is.

I look forward to more

update again soon :)

 

Edited by Kristen
Posted

Fab chapter! Loved it!

The bowling date with Oscar and Skye was very sweet. I'm really enjoying them together now, they work really well!

The pregnancy will certainly complicate matters if it's Oscar's. I'm hoping that it's not because I really like Matt and I'd feel bad for him if that were the case. Obviously it would make for a more interesting storyline though if it isn't. 

Very well written :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter! x

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