The Best Laid Plans (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked how Oscar was honest with Skye

Loved how Olivia is there for Skye as she needed someone like Olivia to confide in

Liked the talk between Maddy and Matt, Oscar

Update soon please xx

[pembie]

I think the baby's going to be Oscar's if only to throw a spanner in the works with Skye..

Have a good holiday

Edited May 8, 2016 by pembie

[Guest]

Great chapter

Glad they told Alf and co about Maddy being pregnant.

Glad Oscar and Matt came to a truce.

Good Skye was there for Oscar.

I hope the baby is Matt's but if it's Oscar's I'm good with that too.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon

 

[Ludub]

Well done to Matt and Oscar for being grown up enough (now that they've calmed down) to talk rationally about the situation they're in. Was a nice chat between them.

Loved Matt's 'crazy kids' dialogue ;-) very funny! 

As I've said before, I think you write dialogue exceptionally well. You have a great ear for each character's particular way of speaking. I can hear their voices in my head when I read your stories. Well done :-)

[Inactive User]

Great chapter 

Liked how Matt and Oscar come to a truce

Loved how Skye is there for Oscar

Looking forwards to the next chapter 

And by the way, I hope you have a good hoilday, RR1  

Edited May 11, 2016 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[JosieTash]

i know that Olivia's just being all protective, but i like how Skye is sticking by Oscar.

 

LOOVED Oscar's  “Like…what point Maddy was in her menstruation cycle at the time, the frequency of ‘the act’, relative sperm count…” it's soooooo him.

 

GREAT pre hols cliffhanger you've left us with !!!!

[KittCatt]

Great Chapter!

Glad Maddy, Matt and Oscar were honest and told everyone about the pregnancy and paternity test. Glad Matt and Oscar were able to put aside their differences for Maddy. Liked the mention of Oscar previously being in a situation like this. Great dialogue.

Liked the addition of Irene. It's up to Skye whether she sticks by Oscar if he is the father. Olivia's right though -  she would always come second or third after the baby and Maddy and they only just began a relationship.

Hope the baby is Matt's but i have a feeling it will be Oscar's. 

I look forward to more 

[hward]

Just read the story so far, and have to say I'm really enjoying it.  I loved Oscar and Skye together.  I hope we find out who the father is next chapter.  Enjoy your holidays

[Phoebe]

Gah! A cliffhanger!! I can't wait to found out who it is! Enjoy your holiday and update when you can  

[pembie]

Sorry didn't realise you updated.

Cool that Matt and Oscar seem to have agreed to call a truce. I wonder if that lasts. I also think Oscar and Skye will be on the verge of breaking up whatever she says..

Hope your holiday going good for you.