Ludub Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Just now, Kristen said: Great chapter Liking the flashbacks. Its giving us some inset to young Kyle. I look forward to more Update again soon My goodness, you're a fast reader! lol! Thanks for the feedback as always Kristen :-) Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 3, 2016 Author Report Posted May 3, 2016 Wonderfully evocative and emotional, I was almost willing for Kyle to open up and I'm so glad he did. Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Awesome chapter, Ludub Liked the flashbacks Looking forwards to the next chapter xx 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted May 3, 2016 Report Posted May 3, 2016 Great Chapter! The way you write these flashbacks are lovely. Glad David got a reaction out of younger Kyle. Poor Kyle, something traumatising must have happened. Glad music seemed to help him. And being able to say no must be a change from what he is used to. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted May 4, 2016 Report Posted May 4, 2016 Awesome chapter Ludub love the chapters with Kyle as a little kid. Poor Kyle he's so little and obviously very hurt. Really like David comforting young Kyle. Loving this Fanfic update soon please. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 4, 2016 Author Report Posted May 4, 2016 Awww, love that the baby's here. I'm surprised at the name Noah but it works. Shame Kyle isn't allowed to enjoy fatherhood for too long, first with his doubts and then with that news report... 1 Quote
Ludub Posted May 4, 2016 Report Posted May 4, 2016 1 minute ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Awww, love that the baby's here. I'm surprised at the name Noah but it works. Shame Kyle isn't allowed to enjoy fatherhood for too long, first with his doubts and then with that news report... I just like the name Noah :-) and I think it works with the surname. I know, I know, I'm terribly cruel to poor old Kyle, lol! Quote
Inactive User Posted May 4, 2016 Report Posted May 4, 2016 Great chapter Awww loved the name Noah for Kyle and Tamara's baby boy Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted May 5, 2016 Report Posted May 5, 2016 Great chapter love the name Noah. Oh no Kyle's past might be catching up with him. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
KittCatt Posted May 5, 2016 Report Posted May 5, 2016 Great Chapter! Happy that that baby arrived Kyle is such a cute father and i like the name Noah. Really liked how Evie and Josh as well as Phoebe and Ash come over to see the baby. And the cute family of Tamara, Kyle and little Noah. Pity Kyle is now reminded of his past and can't enjoy parenthood as much. I hope he is honest and confronts these issues and doesn't leave them festering in the background. I look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote
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