Inactive User Posted August 15, 2016 Report Posted August 15, 2016 Great chapter Awww loved how Oscar met Maddy and got to charm her Poor Zac beginning turned on by Nate Update soon please xx 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted August 15, 2016 Report Posted August 15, 2016 Aww... Maddy and Oscar were very cute I really like how Oscar managed to charm he by just being himself. Nate the tit continues to make me laugh! And now Zac's attracted to him and questioning his sexuality after seeing him run in slow motion, shirtless, as usual Briliiant, once again I look forward to more 1 Quote
Guest Posted August 15, 2016 Report Posted August 15, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Poor Zac being turned on by Nate Glad Oscar got to meet Maddy that scene was very cute Update again soon Edited August 15, 2016 by Kristen Quote
JosieTash Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 (edited) Wondering if Zac's thing with Nate is more than just him being gay, as that sounds rather conventional ...for an out there fic like this anyway !!! LOVE that Oscar thinks that Mads is perfect ..... its like that line "With all your perfect imperfections" from the John Legend song "Äll Of Me" LOVE it !!!! Edited August 16, 2016 by JosieTash 1 Quote
Ludub Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 Awww, Oscar and Maddy continue to be really cute together. Like this a lot Loved Oscar's line "I hope the sand that you find over the next few days will remind you of me until our next date..” A little gross, and pretty awkward, but kinda sweet and funny. 'When you find sand between your asscheeks, think of me'. How romantic! Haha! Haha! Love Zac perving over Nate 'the tit' while Leah watches on in fury from the other side of the room. She really has the wrong end of the stick there doesn't she?! Lol! Matt's on to a winner too... Even if his criminal past is a bit of a let down! Haha! He will just end up babysitting Casey all the time though because we all know that Ricky can't be bothered with him most of the time. Kat wants to talk to Josh... about his hair! To be fair, he does have very nice hair. Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote
pembie Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 20 minutes ago, Ludub said: Awww, Oscar and Maddy continue to be really cute together. Like this a lot Loved Oscar's line "I hope the sand that you find over the next few days will remind you of me until our next date..” A little gross, and pretty awkward, but kinda sweet and funny. 'When you find sand between your asscheeks, think of me'. How romantic! Haha! Oh deary me I never had finding sand in your asscheeks in mind when I wrote this I was thinking in clothes hair that kind of thing... It is a kind of gross image lol 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 Sweet and rather awkward between Oscar and Maddy. (Look on the bright side, Oscar, she only has half as many fingernails as she used to.) Leah grabs the wrong end of the stick, Ricky turns out to be another one who only likes bad boys and Kat knows how to make a dramatic entrance. 2 Quote
Guest Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 Great chapter aww Oscar and Maddy Loved Kat barreling into the diner looking for Josh Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted August 16, 2016 Report Posted August 16, 2016 Great chapter Gonna love Kat when she barrelled into the Diner looking for Josh Liked the sweet and awkward moment between Oscar and Maddy Update soon please Xx 1 Quote
JosieTash Posted August 17, 2016 Report Posted August 17, 2016 LOVED Mads and Oscar’s “From Here To Eternity”- esque kiss as the oceam water washed over them ......and the whole sand is all kinds of places bit. Makes sense that Leah thought Tori was the problem, and what an entrance from Kat !!!! 1 Quote
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