Goodbye, Summer Bay (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Ludub]

Oh my god! Thank you so much Red! I haven't laughed so much in a while! This is absolutely brilliant!  I see what you meant about a certain synchronicity at the start of our stories...  

Loved this: "Andy thought hard.“Murder.Manslaughter.Manslaughter.”He checked on his fingers before adding, “Manslaughter.”  and this: "Andy is my half-brother’s half-brother’s half-brother.You can’t get more family than that".

Also loved the bit about Evie and Tank, and how meant for each other she and Josh obviously were. Josh's resolution to only have 'intimate contact' with his brother and farm animals was quite touching 

My sides actually hurt from laughing so I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment. Love it!

[KittCatt]

Great start! Love it 

Love that Brax forgot who Denny was, and how he classified Josh and Andy murdering Jake and Charlotte as 'okay'  Brax can still have more children too!  

Loved this- “Hey,”Brax interrupted firmly,“Andy is my half-brother’s half-brother’s half-brother.You can’t get more family than that.If your brother turned up, I’d say to him ‘You may have tried to kill me, a lot, but you’re family.Of course you can stay.’”

  “Her brother killed my dad!”Josh protested.

  “You killed Hunter’s mum,”Ricky fired back.

  Josh considered that for a moment.“Yeah, fair enough.”

Looking forward to more 

[Guest]

Great start 

loved that Brax forgot who Denny was.

Whoa at the guy at the end.

update again soon

 

[Inactive User]

Great start, Red Ranger 1  

Loved how Brax forgot about who Denny was, lol

Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

[pembie]

he’s my half-brother’s half-brother’s half…No, wait, sorry, he’s my half-brother’s half-brother’s half-brother’s half-brother.He’s just my half-brother’s half-brother.  I'm not going to lie my brain has just gone into meltdown mode

Also like the part about Denny and Brax forgetting all about her Oh and Ricky saying Casey's around somewhere

Very funny

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 23/08/2016 at 22:24, Ludub said:

Oh my god! Thank you so much Red! I haven't laughed so much in a while! This is absolutely brilliant!  

My sides actually hurt from laughing so I'm definitely looking forward to the next installment. Love it!

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  On 23/08/2016 at 22:37, KittCatt said:

Great start! Love it 

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  On 23/08/2016 at 23:35, Kristen said:

Great start 

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  On 24/08/2016 at 01:07, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Great start, Red Ranger 1  

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  On 24/08/2016 at 01:20, pembie said:

Very funny

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Thank you, all of you.I wasn't in a very jovial mood when I posted this (still aren't particularly...) but I remembered thinking it was funny when I wrote it and reading that you all liked it has cheered me up somewhat.

[Ludub]

  On 24/08/2016 at 15:59, Red Ranger 1 said:

Thank you, all of you.I wasn't in a very jovial mood when I posted this (still aren't particularly...) but I remembered thinking it was funny when I wrote it and reading that you all liked it has cheered me up somewhat.

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Sorry to hear that Red  To be honest, I was feeling pretty down in the dumps too yesterday but this did cheer me up quite a bit. So just wanted to say thanks again  Proper laugh out loud funny! Well done!

[pembie]

I too was feeling down in the dumps so yes it did make me laugh so thanks for that....

[atrus]

Harpo. Excellent stuff.

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 24/08/2016 at 16:35, Ludub said:

Sorry to hear that Red  To be honest, I was feeling pretty down in the dumps too yesterday but this did cheer me up quite a bit. So just wanted to say thanks again  Proper laugh out loud funny! Well done!

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  On 24/08/2016 at 16:49, pembie said:

I too was feeling down in the dumps so yes it did make me laugh so thanks for that....

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Gosh, we sound like a support group! Well, I guess we've all cheered each other up so job done.

 

  On 24/08/2016 at 19:08, atrus said:

Harpo. Excellent stuff.

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Yes, I think I had your musings on how all dodgy characters, especially Braxton nemeses, should have silly names ending in -o ringing in my head when I came up with that.