Goodbye, Summer Bay (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[pembie]

Oh blimey didn't expect everybody to get killed.. Loved Brax as a bubblegum smuggler and the number of times the words bubblegum smuggler were mentioned throughout the chapter. 

Andy screaming with terror ass he was mangled into tiny pieces as he was ran over with a combine harvester was awesome as was Ricky leaving Casey in the barn...

Not sure what is going to happen next is the bubblegum smuggler about to go POP?

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 27/08/2016 at 00:23, pembie said:

Not sure what is going to happen next is the bubblegum smuggler about to go POP?

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Well, a building just blew up around him so there's probably not much of him left...

[CaptainHulk]

^ I'm going to hell for a chuckle at that, aren't I? 

(At least I'll be warm 6 months of the year!)

 

[Ludub]

Haha! Brilliant! Loved this story from start to finish. Love that Casey hasn't got a clue who he is or who his parents are. To be fair, it would be difficult for him!

  On 28/08/2016 at 20:20, Red Ranger 1 said:

He’s not sure but he thinks his dad’s called Nate and his mum’s called either Marilyn or Cheryl.”

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Love Heath and April, and the fact that Bianca is completely oblivious to the two of them getting jiggy right under her nose. Also, Heath's view that Dex couldn't be with Indi because she's far too hot for him! lol! He has a point! 

  On 28/08/2016 at 20:20, Red Ranger 1 said:

I just…set fire to his house when he was inside, then ran off leaving him trapped.”Olivia gave her a pained look.“That sounded better in my head,”he admitted

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Hunter has a fair point too. I mean he did just try to burn a house down with everyone inside, which is very different from something as terrible as accidentally blowing everyone up at a hospital fundraiser... So much less psycho! Loved Olivia's diary entry too! 

  On 28/08/2016 at 20:20, Red Ranger 1 said:

Heath shook his head.“Nah, they never bother about that.So long as you tell the truth, everything works out fine in the end.”

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Haha! Good to know! As long as you tell the truth, it'll all work out in the end. Good thing Isla just put her hands up and admitted to everything, but then that's what baddies do in Home and Away. Also, I must start going to Star Trek conventions and taking photos of any older looking men just in case one of them happens to be a judge. Photos with that kind of leverage could come in handy! 

Thanks for this Red!  Really fun! 

[KittCatt]

Nice ending!

Evie found guilty of killing Charlotte, Hunter and Olivia guilty of killing Oscar and Hannah, and Phoebe guilty of killing Jake!  Loved how they dug themselves in a hole, making themselves look guilty. Pity some more unwanted characters couldn't be found guilty of something, haha!  

Thanks for sharing 

[Inactive User]

Loved the ending to this fanfiction!

I cracked up that the judge had found Evie, Hunter and Olivia, Phoebe guilty of their crimes!

Thank you so much for sharing this fanfiction with us, RR1

 

[Guest]

Loved the ending

It was funny that the judge found Evie,Hunter, Olivia, and Phoebe guilty of the crimes.

Thanks for sharing RR1

 

 

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 28/08/2016 at 20:42, Ludub said:

Thanks for this Red!  Really fun! 

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  On 28/08/2016 at 21:22, KittCatt said:

Thanks for sharing 

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  On 28/08/2016 at 23:16, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Thank you so much for sharing this fanfiction with us, RR1

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  On 29/08/2016 at 05:50, Kristen said:

Thanks for sharing RR1

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Thanks for your usual prompt comments! I knew I couldn't just end it with them all being blown up and it kind of ballooned from a bunch of ideas I had.

[pembie]

Very funny Oliva blaming Hunter's actions on Charlotte just because she has silly hair.... Baby Casey not knowing who his mom is..... The farmer right at the start confusing Brax's name as Max Burton.. Plus nobody being ID because of them all missing their heads. Plus Heath and April and Heath thinking Dexter was dating indi

[JosieTash]

ADORED this fic sooooooooooooooooooooo much.

 

Funny that Casey doesn’t know [effectively] who his bio parents are. LOVED Olivia’s dobbed-herself-in diary entry. To say nothing of Phoebe and the hospital thing. VERY tongue in cheek sarcastic and brilliant.

 

Cooooool too that you included one of your fave couples, Heath & April ......and how obvious Bianca is. Bonus for me that you included Heath, as just yesterday , I saw Dan Ewing on the BIG SCREEN in Aussie monster movie RED BILLABONG!!!

 

Thank you soooooo  much, Red, for sharing this with us !!!!