InfantryAlex Posted June 8, 2016 Report Posted June 8, 2016 (edited) 9 hours ago, Ludub said: I always think that's funny (and not in a good way!). They say that rest is the most important thing with any illness or injury, but stays in hospital usually involve a torturous regime of hourly obs checks that would test the rules of the Geneva Convention. Torture by sleep deprivation! At least Charlie got through it okay! She just wanted to roll over and go back to sleep! I can see Nate being the whole big annoying uncle that would purposely wake her up. 9 hours ago, Ludub said: Charlie is soooo cute! ...She's right! Simba doesn't eat anyone, I think Zac should get her a lion cub just like him! I thought so too! But it would cost a lot, and they'd be breaking the law 23 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: I wonder if it's Peter who sent this note...? I hope not Thanks for reading! Edited June 8, 2016 by ZacxLeah Quote
Guest Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 Great chapter I had a feeling Peter was behind the note and wanted Zac to believe Leah Is cheating on him. Charlie is so cute I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted June 9, 2016 Author Report Posted June 9, 2016 Great chapter! Gosh Zac certainly overreacted! But I suppose if he was really stressed by everything with Charlie he'd be pretty on edge. Liked the scene between him and Irene Charlie continues to be incredibly cute. Love her! Looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what Peter has planned! x 1 Quote
InfantryAlex Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 9 minutes ago, Ludub said: Great chapter! Gosh Zac certainly overreacted! But I suppose if he was really stressed by everything with Charlie he'd be pretty on edge. Liked the scene between him and Irene Charlie continues to be incredibly cute. Love her! Looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what Peter has planned! x He took the I missed you L, part to far. Was waiting for your reply, now I can write the next chapter. Thank you for the support! x 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 9, 2016 Author Report Posted June 9, 2016 21 minutes ago, ZacxLeah said: He took the I missed you L, part to far. Was waiting for your reply, now I can write the next chapter. Thank you for the support! x Aww! sorry to keep you waiting! Lol! Just woke up! x 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 Great chapter Can't believe Zac overreacted about the note. Loved the scene between Irene and Zac Glad Zac and Leah made up And aw loved how Charlie asked her parents to play dollies with her Wondering what Peter got planned next.... Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote
Guest Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 Great chapter loved Zac and Charlie having a movie date. Peter is so creepy. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
InfantryAlex Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 28 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter loved Zac and Charlie having a movie date. Peter is so creepy. I look forward to more Update again soon To cause such an argument, and to imply he has been sleeping with Leah. He sure is! I know Finding Dory isn't out yet, but it was the only kids movie I could think of. Thank you for reading! Quote
Ludub Posted June 9, 2016 Author Report Posted June 9, 2016 (edited) Such a fantastic chapter! Really enjoyed it! I can see why Zac would be worried. The note really did make it sound like she was cheating and with her being out so late, it's understandable that he'd be worried! That Peter! the big meanie! Lol! Loved the idea of Charlie calling Alf Grampa! So cute! I imagine he'd be well chuffed! VJ and Charlie was lovely too, and I really liked VJ being a bit more mature and having a proper talk with Zac. Feel bad for Leah! She's done nothing wrong and having Zac doubt her like this isn't nice at all! Stress! Especially when she's just starting a new job. Love how you paint such a vivid scene of family life. I can picture them all in that house so clearly. Well done! Really looking forward to the next chapter! x Edited June 9, 2016 by Ludub 1 Quote
InfantryAlex Posted June 9, 2016 Report Posted June 9, 2016 3 minutes ago, Ludub said: Such a fantastic chapter! Really enjoyed it! I can see why Zac would be worried. The note really did make it sound like she was cheating and with her being out so late, it's understandable that he'd be worried! That Peter! the big meanie! Lol! Loved the idea of Charlie calling Alf Grandpa! So cute! I imagine he'd be well chuffed! VJ and Charlie was lovely too, and I really liked VJ being a bit more mature and having a proper talk with Zac. Feel bad for Leah! She's done nothing wrong and having Zac doubt her like this isn't nice at all! Stress! Especially when she's just starting a new job. Love how you paint such a vivid scene of family life. I can picture them all in that house so clearly. Well done! Really looking forward to the next chapter! x Many thanks! Yeah, I thought really hard about what to put in the letter, and I remember clearly Zac saying "Even though you are small, your passion is large." In his wedding vows. I thought to trigger his own meanings of that, that it would come down to intimate times as well for the couple. It being Five years would make VJ 23 (Oh hey that's what he looks like now in the Show!) so I thought better make him mature, and able to see the world in an adult way. I am glad the family life is vivid; because that's what I think is important. Its going to bother Leah, that comes next chapter. Leah opens up to Irene about the fight. I know poor Leah! 1 Quote
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