InfantryAlex Posted June 30, 2016 Report Posted June 30, 2016 1 minute ago, Kristen said: uh-oh Peter might get busted. I should hope so! Thank you for reading! Quote
Ludub Posted June 30, 2016 Author Report Posted June 30, 2016 Great chapter! love Hunter Bear and Silly Rabbit once again! So cute! Feel a bit sorry for VJ but it's true that that is usually the case. Most people have their favourites. Ooh, things are really heating up now, aren't they?! How frightening for little Charlie (and everyone else!) Sneaky sneaky Peter! Glad VJ was able to tell them it was him though. Wonder how he'll fake being in Cairns, and what he's planning to do with that gun?! Looking forward to the next chapter. x 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted July 2, 2016 Report Posted July 2, 2016 Great chapter Loved the nicknames for Hunter and Charlie Uh oh! Looks like Peter is going to get busted! Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Great chapter Uh-oh Kat is on to Peter. I have a feeling Peter shoot Zac but will see. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted July 16, 2016 Author Report Posted July 16, 2016 Great chapter! I wonder who he shot?! It was such a nice image of VJ and Hunter playing with their little sister, even if it was overshadowed by the aftermath of the tear gas explosion, but for this to happen is just terrible! Poor Zac and Leah! Nice cliffhanger! x 1 Quote
InfantryAlex Posted July 16, 2016 Report Posted July 16, 2016 Just now, Ludub said: Great chapter! I wonder who he shot?! It was such a nice image of VJ and Hunter playing with their little sister, even if it was overshadowed by the aftermath of the tear gas explosion, but for this to happen is just terrible! Poor Zac and Leah! Nice cliffhanger! x We will see who he shot, we will see! Thank you for the help throughout this story, wouldn't have made it this far without you! x 1 Quote
Ludub Posted July 17, 2016 Author Report Posted July 17, 2016 Oh my goodness! What an action packed chapter! And so very very sad. Poor everybody! I was glad to see that Hunter has matured enough to see that going after Peter wouldn't be the right thing and he was actually able to restrain himself. Poor VJ just seems to be in shock more than anything. Feel terrible for everyone. Looking forward to the next chapter though. I want to see how everyone deals with Leah's loss. 1 Quote
InfantryAlex Posted July 17, 2016 Report Posted July 17, 2016 2 hours ago, Ludub said: Oh my goodness! What an action packed chapter! And so very very sad. Poor everybody! I was glad to see that Hunter has matured enough to see that going after Peter wouldn't be the right thing and he was actually able to restrain himself. Poor VJ just seems to be in shock more than anything. Feel terrible for everyone. Looking forward to the next chapter though. I want to see how everyone deals with Leah's loss. Yep! I was going to kill Zac, but the impact of losing Leah would be much greater (and she's been frustrating me lately in the show, and since this is a sequel and the final sequel to the series. I decided a happy ending wasn't going to happen -- well the ending.... Hm.) Thank you for commenting! 1 Quote
Guest Posted July 17, 2016 Report Posted July 17, 2016 Great heartbreaking chapter Shocked Peter shot and killed Leah feel sorry for Zac,Hunter,VJ and Charlie I hope Kat catches Peter Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted July 17, 2016 Report Posted July 17, 2016 Had been catching up with the last two chapters Good that Kat is onto Peter Whoa so shocked that Peter shot and killed Leah in front of her family! Poor Zac and the boys, Charlie! Update soon please Xx 1 Quote
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