The Cost For Love (by InfantryAlex) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter

Leah's funeral was lovely and heart breaking.

Update again soon

[Inactive User]

Awesome chapter

I agree with Kirsten's comment above

The speeches at Leah's funeral are so beautiful and touching

Update soon please xx

[InfantryAlex]

33 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Awesome chapter

I agree with Kirsten's comment above

The speeches at Leah's funeral are so beautiful and touching

Update soon please xx

I hoped they were, I felt like I left something out, but I can always add it to the next chapter of the final chapter.

Thank you so much for commenting! And the support, even after this amount of absence! 

[Ludub]

What a touching, and very sad chapter!  Loved it. Everyone is written so well here. All the speeches were beautiful. You had me in tears.  Zac hitting the bottle is not a good sign but pretty understandable really  the scene where Charlie got into bed with him nearly broke my heart. Feel very sorry for VJ and Charlie too. Great chapter! Looking forward to the last one x

[InfantryAlex]

15 hours ago, Ludub said:

What a touching, and very sad chapter!  Loved it. Everyone is written so well here. All the speeches were beautiful. You had me in tears.  Zac hitting the bottle is not a good sign but pretty understandable really  the scene where Charlie got into bed with him nearly broke my heart. Feel very sorry for VJ and Charlie too. Great chapter! Looking forward to the last one x

I felt like Charlie wanting to be in there with him that night was justifiable. 

I hoped I gave it enough justice. :3 

 

Thank you for your support.

[Ludub]

Loved loved loved this ending!  Poor Zac! Poor everybody!  It would be so hard for all of them to move on from something like this. To have Leah taken from them in such a violent way, and for such a stupid reason! Even Peter doesn't seem too sure of why he did it. I loved Zac reminding him of Dan and making him think of what he would have wanted. He was very dignified, and I think, as you say, that rattled Peter more. Really enjoyed this story from start to finish, and looking forward to reading whatever you come up with next x

[InfantryAlex]

3 minutes ago, Ludub said:

Loved loved loved this ending!  Poor Zac! Poor everybody!  It would be so hard for all of them to move on from something like this. To have Leah taken from them in such a violent way, and for such a stupid reason! Even Peter doesn't seem too sure of why he did it. I loved Zac reminding him of Dan and making him think of what he would have wanted. He was very dignified, and I think, as you say, that rattled Peter more. Really enjoyed this story from start to finish, and looking forward to reading whatever you come up with next x

You have always been so kind! I really enjoy reading what you think of my stories, and I am glad you like how it came out.

I did try out Zac going in there all raged up, and it didn't seem to fit and work as well as Zac being calm and collected. I wanted to emphasize Zac more in that scene, hence why Peter never said much. 

I nearly had Zac get with Macey, but I tried writing it but I was like "LEAH!" xD

I've already got a fanfiction in mind, it's one of my previous ideas that I'm going to see how well I can put into play. 

Thank you so much

 

Edited November 12, 2016 by ZacxLeah
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[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved the ending to this fanfiction.

Liked how Zac confronted Peter about what he had done

Thank you so much for sharing this fanfiction with us

 

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Poor Charlie glad she made friends with the bullies in the end 

Lovely ending 

Edited November 13, 2016 by Kristen