pembie Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 The whole Pheobe and Brody scene had me really laughing I'm not even sure if Pheobe likes Brody or if she just enjoys involing herself with the drama of the Morgans and pretending to care while trying to get her leg over.. While the whole time Brody's worried about being legless and Pheobe's advice was to join the paralympics and get some robot legs so he can run faster than humans It could have been worse Brody could of died from a flesh eating bacteria and he is one of your faviourte characters Then we move on to McCarthy who seems to have been pleasuring himself over the photos of Kat and Ash on Simmo's laptop Kat's quite right though everyone seems to fancy her. I would just be more interested in Riggins though just because of her monobrow thats something you don't come across everyday poor chick Brilliant chapter. Mason will be back for one final scare I'm sure 2 Quote
Ludub Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 9 hours ago, pembie said: It could have been worse Brody could of died from a flesh eating bacteria and he is one of your faviourte characters This is very true! It's certainly something I'd do, especially to the characters I care about. I can be a little bit sadistic in my writing sometimes! 9 hours ago, pembie said: While the whole time Brody's worried about being legless and Pheobe's advice was to join the paralympics and get some robot legs so he can run faster than humans Yeah, Brody competing in the paralympics might just blow his witness protection cover though (unless he took a leaf out of Justin's book and wore a hat and dark glasses for the duration of the games...I'm sure that would work.) 9 hours ago, pembie said: I would just be more interested in Riggins though just because of her monobrow thats something you don't come across everyday poor chick Haha! Smelly feet and monobrows?! Gotcha! You certainly have diverse taste in women, Pembie! lol! Really glad you're enjoying this. I'm having a right giggle writing it but it's not much good if it doesn't make other people laugh too! Hope to have the final chapter up in the next day or two! x 1 Quote
pembie Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 1 hour ago, Ludub said: Haha! Smelly feet and monobrows?! Gotcha! You certainly have diverse taste in women, Pembie! lol! You might say diverse I say its choosing my women wisely as too not have competition from other guys Quote
Ludub Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 (edited) 4 hours ago, pembie said: You might say diverse I say its choosing my women wisely as too not have competition from other guys I like your thinking Pembie! So there is hope for us less attractive girls then, eh? The ones who don't look like Billie or Charlotte, or even Sam? The monobrowed and moustachioed gals of this world? Even Riggins can get herself a lil sumfin' sumfin'?! hahaha! Edited November 22, 2016 by Ludub Quote
pembie Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 10 minutes ago, Ludub said: I like your thinking Pembie! So there is hope for us less attractive girls then, eh? The ones who don't look like Billie or Charlotte, or even Sam? The monobrowed and moustachioed gals of this world? Even Riggins can get herself a lil sumfin' sumfin'?! hahaha! In my minds eye I will paint a picture of monobrowed girl to look like Billie So there you are its a win win for everybody I'm not sure moustachioed girls though be abit like kissing a man I would think and I couldn't block that out 1 Quote
Ludub Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 5 minutes ago, pembie said: In my minds eye I will paint a picture of monobrowed girl to look like Billie So there you are its a win win for everybody I'm not sure moustachioed girls though be abit like kissing a man I would think and I couldn't block that out Not even Billie with a moustache? A nice big Ron Burgundy? She'd probably keep it well groomed? Moustache oil and everything.... Quote
pembie Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 2 hours ago, Ludub said: Not even Billie with a moustache? A nice big Ron Burgundy? She'd probably keep it well groomed? Moustache oil and everything.... Maybe she cant go having hairy legs though they would have to be smooth and sexy to make up for her manly face lol Quote
Ludub Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 2 minutes ago, pembie said: Maybe she cant go having hairy legs though they would have to be smooth and sexy to make up for her manly face lol I'm glad we got that sorted! lol! Quote
pembie Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 4 minutes ago, Ludub said: I'm glad we got that sorted! lol! Sorry to turn your story thread into the rambling of the tastes of the sort of women I go for haha Quote
Ludub Posted November 22, 2016 Report Posted November 22, 2016 11 minutes ago, pembie said: Sorry to turn your story thread into the rambling of the tastes of the sort of women I go for haha Think we're equally to blame for that! (Zipping mouth now ) Quote
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