Look to the Future (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

25 minutes ago, KittCatt said:

Its refreshing that VJ told Billie about Olivia and she took it well.

Thanks, KittCatt! I hadn't really thought about that one until someone asked if she was going to find out.The opportunity was there so I took it...

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked how Billie took it well when VJ told her about Olivia

Liked how the married couples are married

Update soon Xx

 

[pembie]

Love was truly in the air and Well everybody got very friendly with each other...

I liked the way you wrote the wedding party scene jumping in between the other characters was nicely done and flowed naturally.

It's nice to see Dexter won't be missing out on exploring all those different Stargate galaxies  as well as exploring Lottie's hidden depths Oh yes I think Lottie should call Sid Dad haha 

[Guest]

Great chapter.

Glad the Married couples are very happy!

Aww Chris and Sasha.

Update again soon

[Ludub]

My goodness, Summer Bay is getting jiggy tonight!  What was in those drinks at the wedding reception?! I'm just sad Alf didn't hook up with someone  Really enjoyed this chapter, and as Pembie said, it flowed really well. I'm pleased that VJ told Billie about Olivia (they're finally being honest with each other) and she was okay with it. Chris and Sasha were actually kinda sweet, and Roo and Frank was a surprise (from what little I know, I'm not sure that's such a good idea? ) Loved Dex desperately tryong to hit record with Lottie being a little more insistent on other things! Looking forward to the next chapter x

[Red Ranger 1]

8 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked how the married couples are married

 

5 hours ago, Kristen said:

Glad the Married couples are very happy!

Thanks, you two! Looks like a happy time for them.

6 hours ago, pembie said:

Love was truly in the air and Well everybody got very friendly with each other...

 

1 hour ago, Ludub said:

My goodness, Summer Bay is getting jiggy tonight!  What was in those drinks at the wedding reception?!

And thanks you two! To misquote Jonathan Pope from Moving Wallpaper: "Everyone hooking up in the last five minutes?It's like the after-party at the Baftas!"

[JosieTash]

My eyes are dutibly [sp?] gouged .... hehehehe

 

This action, however, didn’t [somehow] stop me from reading and enjoying Dex at the Sands resort ....both his arrival/convo with the receptionist, and how wonderfully clueless he was when he was actually scoping out the recording option that Lottie suggested ....whilst she was dressed in lingerie !!!

 

Looking fwd to more 

[Red Ranger 1]

7 hours ago, JosieTash said:

My eyes are dutibly [sp?] gouged .... hehehehe

 

This action, however, didn’t [somehow] stop me from reading and enjoying Dex at the Sands resort ....both his arrival/convo with the receptionist, and how wonderfully clueless he was when he was actually scoping out the recording option that Lottie suggested ....whilst she was dressed in lingerie !!!

Dutifully?

Thanks, JT, and glad you enjoyed Dexter's antics despite the self-mutilation. Hopefully get another chapter up later today!

[Ludub]

My goodness! Again, a lot going on in this chapter... but I loved it! So happy for Chris. I never would have put him with Sasha but I'm happy if he's happy, and at least he's getting out of the rut and doing something new. VJ and Billie being friends with Heath and April is interesting. Heath will feel very old! haha! Loved the scene with Roo and Frank and the interaction with Matt and Evie. Very funny! ...And Indi and Brody? I could actually see that working very well!  Looking forward to the next chapter x

[Guest]

Great chapter

Shocked Chris left so soon with Sasha.

Indi moving into Leah's place was a twist.

Update again soon