Look to the Future (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter

wow VJ got a job.

Loved Irene and Leah looking after Stefan.

oh no please not April and Heath.

Liked Indi taking over at the end.

Update again soon

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked Irene and Leah looking after Stefan

Nice that VJ got a job

Whoa at the end about Roo

Update soon please Xx

[JosieTash]

There's a LOT to REALLY like here ........ Heath & April and the whole not so rough sex thing; Matt's comment is being genetic for a Walker/Bezmel to be bossy; Irene and Leah being all doting on Stefan; and the kinda foreshadowing "Be careful of what you wish for."   

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 17/12/2016 at 09:44, Ludub said:

Really enjoyed the scenes with Heath and April. I wasn't expecting to because I've never liked her, but you write her much more sympathetically than the show ever did. Looking forward to more of them!  it was very sweet.

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  On 17/12/2016 at 23:14, JosieTash said:

There's a LOT to REALLY like here ........ Heath & April and the whole not so rough sex thing;

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Thanks, guys, glad you liked it (sorry you didn't, Kristen!). I wasn't a big fan of April but I do think she improved during the period when she was with Heath so I liked including that here.

  On 17/12/2016 at 09:44, Ludub said:

nice little scene with Irene and Leah.

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  On 17/12/2016 at 13:40, Kristen said:

Loved Irene and Leah looking after Stefan.

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  On 17/12/2016 at 21:19, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked Irene and Leah looking after Stefan

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  On 17/12/2016 at 23:14, JosieTash said:

Irene and Leah being all doting on Stefan;

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Well, at least I got universal approval here, thanks y'all! I felt I needed to follow through on the "two grandmothers" idea.

 

  On 17/12/2016 at 09:44, Ludub said:

I loved the bit about the lifts. Olivia's lucky  that Mason's been working out so much, and can carry her about the place, since the Bay is obviously not very wheelchair friendly!

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Thanks, Ludub. It's interesting how writing this, with Maddy's scenes and what I've done with Olivia, is meaning I have to think about these things.I felt that scene needed a bit more so I decided to include Mason and Olivia, since they weren't in the chapter otherwise, and then I found myself wondering how on earth someone in a wheelchair would get up to Salt.(Thanks for the tip earlier, pembie!)

[Ludub]

  On 17/12/2016 at 23:30, Red Ranger 1 said:

Thanks, Ludub. It's interesting how writing this, with Maddy's scenes and what I've done with Olivia, is meaning I have to think about these things.I felt that scene needed a bit more so I decided to include Mason and Olivia, since they weren't in the chapter otherwise, and then I found myself wondering how on earth someone in a wheelchair would get up to Salt.(Thanks for the tip earlier, pembie!)

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I love this aspect of writing! It can really expand your mind. When I write Josh as blind, I really have to think about how he'd do things, and how he'd interact with people. I sometimes act it out myself like some big weirdo to make sure I'm getting it right. Really interesting! 

[pembie]

  On 17/12/2016 at 23:38, Ludub said:

I love this aspect of writing! It can really expand your mind. When I write Josh as blind, I really have to think about how he'd do things, and how he'd interact with people. I sometimes act it out myself like some big weirdo to make sure I'm getting it right. Really interesting! 

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Do you wander around your living room blindfolded?

[pembie]

Heath's way with words to tell April he kind of loves her was amusing But it does sound like its reached that having feelings stage now for them both

I don't really blame April wanting to put off meeting Cheryl..

Kat not want to pry into VJ and Billie's persnol lives haha... Yeah right I loved that little dig at Kat there VJ and Billie high fiving when VJ got the job

Mason did well to carry Oliva up those stairs he wasn't even out of breath

Roo and Frank's one night stand led to Roo getting pregnant I'm well impressed

[KittCatt]

Great chapter!

Nice moment between April and Heath. I think they could work out, especially with little Chandler. But If April wants Bianca in her life in anyway it may be rough getting there.. 

Roo's "Be careful what you wish for" really highlighted what was to come. Wonder how she's going to cope. And Billie, VJ and little Stefan with the diner ladies was really cute. Loved Irene and Leah fawning over the baby. 

Looking forward to more!

[Red Ranger 1]

  On 18/12/2016 at 02:54, pembie said:

Roo and Frank's one night stand led to Roo getting pregnant I'm well impressed

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  On 18/12/2016 at 08:37, KittCatt said:

Roo's "Be careful what you wish for" really highlighted what was to come. Wonder how she's going to cope.

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Thanks, you two! More on Roo and Frank in the next chapter, which I'll hopefully manage to get up today.

[Ludub]

  On 18/12/2016 at 02:28, pembie said:

Do you wander around your living room blindfolded?

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Basically, yes  I did say 'like a big weirdo'  haha!