christine king Posted February 2, 2017 Report Posted February 2, 2017 (edited) I thought they were setting up a eating disorder storyline for Hunter at the end of last year but it never happened, this is my take on if it did. Story Title: The Waves Hit Type of story: Short/Medium Fic Main Characters: Hunter, Olivia, Zac, Irene, Leah, VJ BTTB rating: T/A Genre: Drama/Family/Romance/General Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: Violence. Summary: Hunter has just been dumped by Olivia and is a mess but what if he developed an eating disorder during this time? how would that affect him? and would anyone realise before its too late? Chapter 1: The Beach Hunter is running on the beach when Zac find him Hunter: hey Zac: how are you this morning? Hunter: you know powering though Zac: you are ok right? Hunter: why wouldn't I be? Zac: you've been exrecising alot latley and you didn't eat dinner last night Hunter: dad seriously I am fine.. I just want to be healthy Zac: ok but no more skipping meals Hunter: what ever you say Zac: good, I'll see you later Hunter: bye Summer Bay House Zac and Leah are chatting Leah: so did you talk to Hunter? Zac: yeah and he says he is fine Leah: are you sure? Zac: no but he just got dumped by Olivia, maybe he needs more time Leah: yeah maybe Zac: I am worried about him Leah: only natural Zac: I'm sure he'll be fine Edited March 25, 2022 by QUIET ACHIEVER
christine king Posted February 9, 2017 Author Report Posted February 9, 2017 Chapter 2: The Gym Hunter and VJ are working out together VJ: so are you doing okay? Hunter: why does everyone seem to think I'm not okay VJ: maybe because you aren't coping? Hunter: I'm fine VJ: yeah sure you are Hunter: seriously if you don't want to hang out just say, we don't have to be here VJ: well lets go somewhere and talk properly then Hunter: fine if it will shut you up VJ: hey I'm trying to be your friend here Hunter: your not doing a good job VJ: yeah like your prefect, you've barely been around for me latley Hunter: yet here we are arguring about that VJ: maybe if you actually act like a human for once Hunter: I am Human and I am fine VJ: you know what, your on your own, don't blame me anymore for your problems VJ walks away Hunter: don't worry I won't Summer Bay House VJ enters the house Billie: your back early? VJ: yeah well Hunter was being annoying Billie: you could give him a break? VJ: why bother? hes being so stupid Billie: hes clearly suffering and all your doing is letting him push you away VJ: why is it up to me? Billie: because your his friend VJ: yeah I know, I should be helping him Billie: good, glad you figured that out VJ: what would I do without you? Billie: no I'm the lucky one, you stayed and you didn't have too VJ: hey were both lucky
christine king Posted February 12, 2017 Author Report Posted February 12, 2017 Chapter 3: Summer Bay House Hunter and VJ are playing video games together VJ: you seem better? Hunter: I'm sorry about freaking out on you, I just feel like everyone's out to get me VJ: hey I'm here for you, you know that? Hunter: of course VJ: you seen Olivia latley? Hunter: trying to advoid her but its not working VJ: well we do live in a small town Hunter: yeah thats tue VJ: cheer up, I'm ging to beat you Hunter: you wish, see I just won, so their VJ: rematch Hunter: maybe later, I'm going for a run VJ: do you want me to come with? Hunter: nah, I'm okay VJ: just call if you change your mind Hunter: yeah I will Beach House VJ comes to see Olivia VJ: hey Olivia: what you doing here? VJ: came to see you Olivia: yeah but why? VJ: you mean I can't just see my friend? Olivia: of course but we both know its not just about that VJ: fine, I need to talk to you about Hunter Olivia: whats he done now? VJ: nothing Olivia: ok so whats wrong? VJ: hes just being distant and stuff Olivia: well what do you want me to do about it? VJ: talk to him Olivia: I don't know if thats a good idea VJ: come on, he needs you Olivia: ok fine, I'll go and talk to him VJ: thank you and good luck
christine king Posted February 15, 2017 Author Report Posted February 15, 2017 Chapter 4: Hunter's Caravan Olivia approaches Hunter Olivia: Hi Hunter: Hey Olivia: how are you? Hunter: I'm fine, how are you? Olivia: I'm good but I know your not fine Hunter: your wrong Olivia: no I'm not, I know you just as well as you know me and I know your not fine Hunter: fine, I'm not fine, are you happy? Olivia: at least your being honest Hunter: why are you here? Olivia: I thought we could go to dinner, like old times? Hunter: like a date? Olivia: no just friends Hunter: I don't want to be friends, you dumped me if you don't want to get back together just leave me alone Hunter bails Zac see's Hunter walk away from Olivia and goes to talk to her Zac: Is Hunter ok? Olivia: no Zac: what happened? Olivia: me and VJ both tried to talk to him but he won't listen Zac: I'm sure he will soon Olivia: maybe? I don't know Zac: he'll be ok Olivia: will he? He's in this dark place and I feel like it's all my fault, I dumped him but I still love him, I just can't... Zac pulls Olivia into a hug Zac: calm down, just take a breath, you'll be ok
christine king Posted February 16, 2017 Author Report Posted February 16, 2017 (edited) Chapter 5: Summer Bay House Hunter, Zac, Leah have just finished eating dinner Zac: so how are you? Hunter: seriously, do we have to keep doing this Zac: doing what? Hunter: you making sure I'm ok Zac: I just want to know you are Hunter: I'm fine, thank you for dinner Hunter leaves Leah: hes been eating with us all week, maybe you should cut him some slack Zac: I know, I'm just worried, hes not coping Leah: hes ok Zac: I hope your right Caravan Park Hunter goes for a walk into the bush and he starts throwing up everything in his stomach... Edited February 16, 2017 by christine king
christine king Posted February 21, 2017 Author Report Posted February 21, 2017 Sorry for the long wait, I'll try to update quicker. I hope you guys enjoy this one. Chapter 6: The Beach Hunter is running on the beach when VJ stops him VJ: you going to be mad at me forever? Hunter: that depends, are you going to be an idiot forever? VJ: harsh Hunter: fine, sorry, were cool, you can leave now? VJ: how do you know I don't want to hang out? Hunter: well do you? VJ: yeah Hunter: do you want to run with me? VJ: yeah ok as long as you take it easy Hunter: ok but you have to try to beat me VJ: agreed, mission accepted Hunter: its on Summer Bay House Leah: its good you've let up on Hunter Zac: well hes doing well Leah: I'm just glad everything is getting back to normal Zac: you and me both Caravan Park A guy approaches Hunter Sean: so you want me to hook you up? Hunter: yeah, can you get them? Sean: of course Hunter: cool Sean: are you sure you want them? Hunter: yeah I need them Sean: I'll get you appetite suppressant pills by tomorrow Hunter: thank you Sean: they not cheap, do you have the cash? Hunter: yep Sean: happy doing buisness with you then, we'll do the deal tomorrow
christine king Posted February 24, 2017 Author Report Posted February 24, 2017 Hope you guys like this chapter, enjoy. Chapter 7: Hunter's Caravan Hunter is waiting when Sean turns up Hunter: you have them? Sean: show me the cash Hunter gives him the money Sean: are you really sure you want these? Hunter: yes Sean hands over the pills Sean: if you ever need more, you know where I am Sean leaves The Gym Hunter is working out when Zac arrives Zac: hey Hunter: hi Zac: you've been working out alot Hunter: yeah to get my fitness up Zac: ok as long as thats all their is Hunter: what else would their be? Zac: I don't know, you tell me Hunter: there's nothing else going on Zac: ok, I beleive you Hunter: good Zac: so you want to have lunch together Hunter: sure, I'll be out in a second Zac: ok I'll be outside Hunter grabs his bag and quickly takes the pills out, he then takes one before putting them back in his bag
christine king Posted March 1, 2017 Author Report Posted March 1, 2017 (edited) Hope you guys like this chapter, enjoy. Chapter 8 Hunter's Caravan VJ and Hunter are hanging out in Hunter's caravan VJ: you never want to do anything lately Hunter: what are you on about? VJ: your always exercising or working out, its like you forget how to have fun Hunter: ok well what do you want to do? VJ: well there's a party on the beach tonight, you should come with Hunter: what about Billie? VJ: she'll be ok for one night Hunter: ok I'm in but it better be fun VJ: it will be, just relax and come have some real fun The Beach VJ and Hunter arrive but Hunter soon she's Olivia and wants to bail but VJ refuses to let him VJ: hey I am going to be a father in a few months and I want to have some fun before then Hunter: emotional blackmail I like it VJ: I thought it would work Hunter: only because I've used it before in the past VJ: actually VJ goes to see Olivia while Hunter see's anther person he doesn't want to see, his dealer Sean... Edited March 1, 2017 by christine king
christine king Posted February 2, 2022 Author Report Posted February 2, 2022 (edited) I’m going to be revisit this story. So here goes Chapter 9 The Beach Hunter goes to grab a beer and Sean walks over to him wanting to chat Sean: Hey Hunter: What are you doing here? Sean: It’s a party! Hunter: So? Sean: So it’s a free party on the beach would be stupid to not come. Hunter: I guess. VJ approaches them VJ: Hey who’s this? Hunter: Sean VJ: How do you guys know each other? Hunter: We don’t. It’s a party. You talk to random people. VJ: Fair. Come on let’s go dance. Hunter: Sure. You still suck at dancing? VJ: One way to find out! Hunter and VJ go dance. Later Hunter goes to get another beer but this time he finds Olivia at the drinks station. Olivia: Hey. How are you? Hunter: Do you care? Olivia: Of course I do! Hunter: Then get back with me! Olivia: Hunter I… Hunter: We were happy and good together. You can’t not admit that! Olivia: It’s not that simple! Hunter: It is! You just don’t love me anymore! Hunter walks off and Olivia goes to find VJ Olivia: Why did you leave Hunter alone? VJ: He went to get a drink chill! Olivia: Well we had a fight and he took off! VJ: We have to find him now! Edited February 2, 2022 by christine king
christine king Posted February 19, 2022 Author Report Posted February 19, 2022 Chapter 10 The Beach VJ and Olivia have been searching the beach but couldn’t find Hunter anywhere. They go to check the caravan park too but he’s no where in sight and he’s not in his van either. They are both really worried but don’t know where to check since it’s dark, late and everyone is shut and everyone is asleep in bed. They decide to go home and try to sleep. Summer Bay House VJ arrives home. He goes up to his room and gets into bed with Billie who is already asleep. Beach House Olivia arrives home and finds the house all quiet. She locks the front door and goes up to her room. She goes to sleep. Summer Bay House VJ comes down stairs to find Billie, Zac and Leah eating breakfast. VJ: Have you guys seen or heard from Hunter this morning? Zac: No why? Leah: What happened? VJ: He ran off at the party last night. Me and Olivia tried looking for him but we couldn’t find him. Billie: Maybe he’s back now? Did you check his caravan? VJ: I just woke up and was just about too. VJ and Zac head outside Hunter’s Caravan VJ and Zac arrive and realise the door is still locked meaning Hunter hasn’t been back. They decide to mount a search party for Hunter. They have to find him. Beach House Olivia wakes up and discovers her window is open which is weird because she thought she shut it last night. She walks downstairs to find the place trashed! Someone has broken in! She calls out to Irene but on receiving no answer she realises Irene must of left to go to work early. She grabs her phone and calls the cops to report a break in!
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