Ludub Posted December 29, 2016 Report Posted December 29, 2016 Haha! Loved Matt in this chapter! He was so... 'Matt'. You write him so well! Loved his line about having fun until they were interrupted. Again, love how civilised the two boys are being, and Phoebe reacted quite well to them being there. Looking forward to seeing what happens x Quote
Guest Posted December 29, 2016 Report Posted December 29, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Liked Matt having fun with Evelyn until they got interrupted. Glad Justin was able to talk to Phoebe. Update again soon Edited December 29, 2016 by Kristen Quote
christine king Posted December 29, 2016 Report Posted December 29, 2016 2 hours ago, Ludub said: Haha! Loved Matt in this chapter! He was so... 'Matt'. You write him so well! Loved his line about having fun until they were interrupted. Again, love how civilised the two boys are being, and Phoebe reacted quite well to them being there. Looking forward to seeing what happens x Yes Matt is a awesome guy isn't he. Phoebe did react well to them being their because its a free country. 2 hours ago, Kristen said: Liked Matt having fun with Evelyn until they got interrupted. Glad Justin was able to talk to Phoebe. Yes all good things. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 29, 2016 Report Posted December 29, 2016 Some nice banter, especially from Matt.Loved his deadpan reaction to Phoebe's sarcasm. 1 Quote
Guest Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 (edited) Great chapter It was good Phoebe was having fun with Matt and Evelyn until she saw Justin and Brody. I wonder what Michael will do now that Hunter threated him. Update again soon Edited December 30, 2016 by Kristen Quote
christine king Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 2 hours ago, Kristen said: Great chapter It was good Phoebe was having fun with Matt and Evelyn until she saw Justin and Brody. I wonder what Michael will do now that Hunter threated him. Update again soon Yes Phoebe did have some fun and Hunter may just be in some trouble. Quote
Ludub Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 Loved all the banter between Matt and Evie (Mevie? Evatt? Lol!) and Phoebe. Very entertaining looks like Brody and Justin had a bit of a wasted trip with Phoebe skidaddling like that! Think people need to back off and let Pheebs make up her mind in her own time. It does feel a little bit like dogs sniffing around a bitch in heat! haha! Worried for Hunter. Wonder what Michael will do now. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
christine king Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 42 minutes ago, Ludub said: Loved all the banter between Matt and Evie (Mevie? Evatt? Lol!) and Phoebe. Very entertaining looks like Brody and Justin had a bit of a wasted trip with Phoebe skidaddling like that! Think people need to back off and let Pheebs make up her mind in her own time. It does feel a little bit like dogs sniffing around a bitch in heat! haha! Worried for Hunter. Wonder what Michael will do now. Looking forward to the next chapter x I'm pretty sure its Mevie and I'm glad your enjoying them. Yes everyone should back off Phoebe but I doubt they will and Micheal is a dangerous guy. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 Evelyn seems to have very definite ideas about who Phoebe should be with... Michael could cause trouble for Hunter. Quote
Inactive User Posted December 30, 2016 Report Posted December 30, 2016 Great chapters Loved Matt having fun with Evelyn until aww...they got interrupted, hehe. Liked how Justin is able to talk to Phoebe Uh oh looks like Michael is going to cause trouble for Hunter Update soon please xx Quote
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