christine king Posted January 26, 2017 Report Posted January 26, 2017 14 hours ago, Kristen said: Man Ash can be so nosey! Yes Ash is annoying sometimes. 8 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Sounds like Hunter's plan worked Yes Hunter's plan did work but not as well as he hoped. 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Ooh, interesting! Like what you've done here So we've had a time jump and now we have to fill in the blanks? Intriguing! Ash really doesn't know when to drop it, does he?! And I'm interested to know what happened between Phoebe and Justin, and how Hunter's plan unfolded. Really looking forward to the next chapter x All will be revealed. Quote
Guest Posted January 26, 2017 Report Posted January 26, 2017 Great chapter Whoa bit of a love triangle between Phoebe,Brody and Justin. Wonder if Zac has found out what Hunter did. Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 26, 2017 Report Posted January 26, 2017 Looks like things have exploded between Justin, Brody and Phoebe.Not sure about how things have gone with Hunter, it seems a bit anti-climactic and unsatisfactory at first glance:Did he set really get away with setting Michael up?Does Kat know and has kept quiet, which seems a bit corrupt even for her?Oh well, I guess we'll find out... Quote
Ludub Posted January 26, 2017 Report Posted January 26, 2017 Man, Phoebe likes to make things complicated, doesn't she?! So, has she just decided that she wants them both?! Well, why not, I guess?! I mean, Phoebe's just fabulous isn't she?! She might as well have two gorgeous men falling at her feet and fawning all over her They could work up a rota, I guess... y'know, so things don't get too weird... Hunter seems a bit haunted by his actions? Flashbacks and now a near panic attack with Zac questioning him. I'm interested to know what actually happened. Intriguing. Interesting story alright. You know how to keep your reader's attention Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote
christine king Posted January 27, 2017 Report Posted January 27, 2017 21 hours ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Whoa bit of a love triangle between Phoebe,Brody and Justin. Wonder if Zac has found out what Hunter did. Update again soon 20 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Looks like things have exploded between Justin, Brody and Phoebe.Not sure about how things have gone with Hunter, it seems a bit anti-climactic and unsatisfactory at first glance:Did he set really get away with setting Michael up?Does Kat know and has kept quiet, which seems a bit corrupt even for her?Oh well, I guess we'll find out... 7 hours ago, Ludub said: Man, Phoebe likes to make things complicated, doesn't she?! So, has she just decided that she wants them both?! Well, why not, I guess?! I mean, Phoebe's just fabulous isn't she?! She might as well have two gorgeous men falling at her feet and fawning all over her They could work up a rota, I guess... y'know, so things don't get too weird... Hunter seems a bit haunted by his actions? Flashbacks and now a near panic attack with Zac questioning him. I'm interested to know what actually happened. Intriguing. Interesting story alright. You know how to keep your reader's attention Looking forward to the next chapter x Thanks guys for reading and all your questions will be answered, 1 Quote
Guest Posted January 27, 2017 Report Posted January 27, 2017 Great chapter Hmm wondering about Hunter having flashbacks. I agree with Lubud's earlier comment you currently know how to keep your readers attention. Phoebe wants it all both Morgan brothers. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted January 27, 2017 Report Posted January 27, 2017 Great chapters Really intrigued about Hunter and his flashbacks Looking forwards to the next chapter Xx Quote
christine king Posted January 28, 2017 Report Posted January 28, 2017 23 hours ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Hmm wondering about Hunter having flashbacks. I agree with Lubud's earlier comment you currently know how to keep your readers attention. Phoebe wants it all both Morgan brothers. Update again soon 22 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapters Really intrigued about Hunter and his flashbacks Looking forwards to the next chapter Xx Thanks for reading guys, next chapter should be up soon. Quote
Guest Posted January 28, 2017 Report Posted January 28, 2017 Great chapter liked Hunter telling Zac what he did. Should of known Zac would want to involve Kat she is a cop after all. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted January 28, 2017 Report Posted January 28, 2017 Great chapter Glad Hunter told Zac what he did about the drugs Looking forwards to the next chapter Xx Quote
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