Guest Posted July 12, 2017 Report Posted July 12, 2017 Great chapter Bad news about Hope hopefully she isn't to hurt and will be ok. Update again soon
sallyandflynnfan Posted July 12, 2017 Report Posted July 12, 2017 Bad news bout hope. Phoebe and Brody are so cute together
Inactive User Posted July 13, 2017 Report Posted July 13, 2017 Great chapter Hope Hope isn't seriously hurt and that she will be okay Update soon please xx
christine king Posted July 13, 2017 Author Report Posted July 13, 2017 13 hours ago, pembie said: Lets hope Hope is ok 13 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: News about Hope, be nice if Raffy gets to see her. 12 hours ago, Ludub said: Flirty closing line there. Interested to see what happens with Hope. 7 hours ago, Kristen said: Bad news about Hope hopefully she isn't to hurt and will be ok. 6 hours ago, sallyandflynnfan said: Bad news bout hope. Phoebe and Brody are so cute together 2 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Hope Hope isn't seriously hurt and that she will be okay Awe everyone worried about Hope. Thanks for reading guys.
christine king Posted July 13, 2017 Author Report Posted July 13, 2017 Chapter 11 The Morgan's Raffy: pick up.. pick up Raffy is trying to contract "someone" by Syke Raffy: come on work The person comes on Raffy: hi Ellie: hey I got your message, whats up? Raffy: its Hope Ellie: what happened? Raffy: she was attacked in jail but shes out now! Ellie: is she in hospital? Raffy: yeah Ellie: is she ok? Raffy: I think so.. I'm going to see her later Ellie: oh well good luck Raffy: thanks Ellie: talk soon Raffy: bye Later Hospital Raffy arrives at the hospital with Justin, Brody, Tori, Mason and Phoebe Tori: you okay? Raffy: I'm not sure Justin: you don't have to go in Raffy: No I want too.. I'm just scared Mason: we're all here Brody: yeah were not going anywhere Phoebe: just take a deep breath and breath Tori: and put one foot in front of the other Raffy and the others enter Hope's room...
Kellicopter Posted July 13, 2017 Report Posted July 13, 2017 Ooooh Ellie's back! I've enjoyed reading this, as I'm also trying to write the Morgan's! Hoping I can get their conversational flow as well as you do. I love how you end each time with a cliff hanger! I might as well be dangling on the edge!
Inactive User Posted July 13, 2017 Report Posted July 13, 2017 Great chapter Liked the Skype chat between Raffy and Ellie Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx
christine king Posted July 13, 2017 Author Report Posted July 13, 2017 1 hour ago, sallyandflynnfan said: Great chapter please update I Will when I get time. 58 minutes ago, Kellicopter said: Ooooh Ellie's back! I've enjoyed reading this, as I'm also trying to write the Morgan's! Hoping I can get their conversational flow as well as you do. I love how you end each time with a cliff hanger! I might as well be dangling on the edge! Thank you, that means a lot that you like my writting. I have to keep you coming back yeah? Haha. 46 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Liked the Skype chat between Raffy and Ellie Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx I wasn't comfable writting the new family yet (so they won't be in this story) as I am still learning about them so I thought of old friends. Thanks for reading guys.
Guest Posted July 13, 2017 Report Posted July 13, 2017 Great chapter yes Ellie's back Liked the Skype call between Ellie and Raffy Update again soon
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