christine king Posted September 29, 2017 Author Report Posted September 29, 2017 9 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Mason was somewhat blasé about what seemed to be a rather desperate message from Lara! So, seems the "nay"s have won out with regards Hope although at least they're finding a way for her to stick around. Yeah I don't know whether Mason was right or not. Yeah Hope is staying! 5 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Liked Brody and Phoebe's chat Looking forwards to the next chapter xx Thanks.
sallyandflynnfan Posted September 29, 2017 Report Posted September 29, 2017 Great chapter Love Phoebe and Brody chat hopefully he tells her what it is next chapter. I thinking it that he loves her Loved Tori and Hope chat
christine king Posted September 29, 2017 Author Report Posted September 29, 2017 3 hours ago, sallyandflynnfan said: Great chapter Love Phoebe and Brody chat hopefully he tells her what it is next chapter. I thinking it that he loves her Loved Tori and Hope chat Thanks.
Ludub Posted September 30, 2017 Report Posted September 30, 2017 Glad they made the sensible decision re Hope. Even she isn't sure she can go straight! Interesting chat between Brody and Phoebe. He likes to talk in riddles doesn't he? And Mason didn't seem too bothered about Lara's cry for help (or is he?)
pembie Posted September 30, 2017 Report Posted September 30, 2017 Intesting concerning Lara hopefully Mason and Justin can help her out in time
christine king Posted October 1, 2017 Author Report Posted October 1, 2017 6 hours ago, Ludub said: Glad they made the sensible decision re Hope. Even she isn't sure she can go straight! Interesting chat between Brody and Phoebe. He likes to talk in riddles doesn't he? And Mason didn't seem too bothered about Lara's cry for help (or is he?) I think Brody was just trying to explain his point as for Mason his decision could be wrong, we will see. 2 hours ago, pembie said: Intesting concerning Lara hopefully Mason and Justin can help her out in time Maybe they can, who knows
christine king Posted October 10, 2017 Author Report Posted October 10, 2017 Sorry for not updating sooner but here is the new chapter, enjoy. Chapter 19 The Morgan's house Phoebe is still standing outside but now alone... she keeps replaying Brody's words in her head Tori: hey Phoebe: whoa you scared me Tori: sorry Phoebe: that's ok, I was just in my own head I guess Tori: anything interesting? Phoebe: to be decided.. Tori: you know if there's anything you need to talk about I'mm here for you Phoebe: why because were family now? Tori: family, friends, same difference, it all counts Phoebe: I guess it does.. can I ask you something? Tori: sure fire away Phoebe: when you had to chose between Nate and Duncan, why'd you chose Duncan for? Tori: um because I didn't want to get hurt by Nate I guess Phoebe: so you chose the safe option? so to speak Tori: I guess.. I think I chose Duncan because I liked him but not enough to get heart broken by him you know Phoebe: but now you and Nate are together and happy Tori: yeah we are but it took forever.. kind of like you and Justin hey? Phoebe: yeah we sure did Tori: but now you guys are happy Phoebe: yeah we are.. I love him Tori: right so everything's prefect? Phoebe: I don't think any relationship is ever prefect Tori: no but if its prefect most of the time then its worth it Phoebe: well what else are you suppose to do, just sit around and cry? Tori: be a strong independent woman who doesn't need a man! Phoebe: well their is that! Tori: everything will work out Phoebe: how can you know that? Tori: I don't but if you don't have faith then what are we doing? Phoebe: true Tori: you will always be a part of our family no matter who your with... Phoebe: what? I never said? Tori: and neither did I, I got to go to work see you later Phoebe: bye The Beach Mason and Justin are swimming in the water Justin: you know I never understood how our family can be so different? Mason: everyone is different, its be boring if everyone was the same Justin: yeah your right Mason: I know I'm right! Justin: don't get to cocky now! Mason swims to the sand bar and then stands on it Mason: I'm king of the world! Justin: for five seconds Mason: what do you mean by Justin tackles him into the water Justin: ha, I win Mason: you suck Justin: sore loser Mason: like you can talk, you always sulk when you lose monopoly Justin: only because you guys cheat Mason: no we don't Justin: do too Mason: do not Justin: ok stop, time to act like the adults we are Mason: oh alright Mason splashes Justin Justin: oi no fair, I wasn't ready Mason: you snooze you lose Justin: I don't think so Justin splashes Mason back Mason: oi Justin: nar nar nah, you can't catch me Justin starts swimming back to shore Mason: I'm coming for you Mason starts swimming and eventually he catches up, they are neck to neck but at the last second Justin hits the beach first Justin: and the crowd goes wild Mason: yeah you only won by a second big deal Justin: a second is all it takes bro, chin up, take the loss like a man Mason: yeah, yeah Mason goes to check his phone and is surprised by a missed call, he calls the unknown number back but is shocked by what he hears! Justin: whats happened? Mason: we got to go to the city hospital Justin: why? Mason: Lara's in intensive care!
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Liked the chat between Phoebe and Tori, it felt very natural. And bit of a shocker (or not?) for Mason...
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Liked the chat between Tori and Phoebe Whoa at the ending! I wondered what happened to Lara Update soon please xx
Guest Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Liked the friendly talk between Tori and Phoebe Whoa at Lara being in intensive care wonder what happened Update again soon
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