Ludub Posted December 1, 2017 Report Posted December 1, 2017 I've said it before, and I'll say it again... I absolutely love the way you write Justin. He's just so... 'Justin'... and that makes me happy. It was kind of true to life to see him feeling like a bit of a spare part without Scarlett. Typical that he doesn't get how much of a tool he was being earlier, and instead thinks that it was Scarlett acting weird. I love them together, and you've captured their awkward dynamic so well! I also don't blame him for wanting to go home and eat in front of the playstation instead of going back with Ash to an apartment with a screaming baby. Sounds like a much more appealing option! Feel bad for Brody, but it's not like Ziggy is cheating on him. Still, as Red said, it's best that he talk to Mason first. Raffy being annoyed at having to work! On 11/22/2017 at 11:07, Kellicopter said: She wasn't too keen on this working idea, she felt like it was going to be the start of the end of her life. She'd be right there. So right! Loved it, looking forward to the next chapter!
Kellicopter Posted December 22, 2017 Author Report Posted December 22, 2017 This isn’t an update sorry! Just wanted to say Merry christmas to all of you who read this, I hope you have a wonderful time. I have a month off (both jobs, shock!) so hopefully I can write and post some more in the coming weeks!
pembie Posted December 22, 2017 Report Posted December 22, 2017 2 hours ago, Kellicopter said: This isn’t an update sorry! Just wanted to say Merry christmas to all of you who read this, I hope you have a wonderful time. Merry Christmas hope you have a good time
Kellicopter Posted January 2, 2018 Author Report Posted January 2, 2018 Happy New Year to you all. I hope 2018 is a good one for all of you. For myself 2017 was the best year of my life so far (I wonder why ) so I hope this one is just as good if not better. Have a new chapter to celebrate. Chapter 22 Tori had thrown a couple of bits into a bag ready for an over night stay at Ash's. She wasn't entirely sure when the trial move in was going to happen, but she was pretty certain she was going to have to talk to her current housemates about it before she started moving her things. She was sure her brothers would be fine with it, Raffy however she was worried about. How would a teenage girl cope in the house with all the testosterone flying about? It wasn't like Tori was moving far, but maybe Raffy needed her. At this point she realised she seemed to be coming up with excuses not to go. Is that because she didn't want to? Or because she was scared? “Hey guys!” Tori whispered as she tiptoed through the front door of the apartment. She didn't want to wake Luc if she'd already been put down for the night. But as she closed the door behind her, she saw Luc sitting in her high chair across from VJ enjoying something she assumed Brody had cooked up not long before. “Good evening!” Ash said as he looked at her with a smile. Tori walked towards him and placed a kiss on his cheek. “Your dinner's on the top there.” Tori went to put her bag down next to the counter and picked a fork out of the kitchen drawer with one hand, and her dinner up with the other. She walked towards the sofa and plonked herself next to Ash. VJ was trying to feed himself while also spoon feeding Luc, although hers seemed to end up everywhere except her mouth. “So um, Veej. I've been meaning to talk to you about something.” Ash struck up the conversation. “You're not firing me already are you?” VJ looked concerned, but hoped what he just said would be laughed at. “Of course not! Why would you think that?” Ash laughed, also now quite worried that this was going through his mind. “I'm not sure, just seems serious?” The only other thing that could worry VJ now is if this was anything to do with Luc. “Well, me and Tori have discussed her maybe moving in. But you live here too, so I wanted to make sure it was something you'd be on board with.” Ash kept his serious expression on his face and looked at VJ for any indication that he might not be on board. “I mean, you basically live here anyway don't you?” VJ smiled and laughed looking at Tori, he wasn't wrong. They did spend a lot of time together, and because of Luc it was normally in the apartment. Tori started to talk “it would only be a trial! Just to see if we can make it work, you know with Luc and my shift patterns...” She found herself trying to justify it, when she knew that VJ really didn't mind. “Guys, it's cool.” VJ smiled at them both. “You can always move Luc into my room if you need more space.” He suggested. Ash and Tori looked at each other and he let her put her head on his shoulder. The smiles on their faces said it all. Now all Tori had to do was tell the family. Maybe family breakfast on Sunday would be the right time. “Can you not mention it to any of my family yet please?” Tori asked, “I've not spoken to any of them yet, but I'll do it soon.” “I know nothing.” VJ said dramatically zipping his lips together. He turned back and carried on feeding Luc spoonfuls of his dinner, but he could tell she was getting tired from all the rubbing of her eyes she was doing. Maybe it was time for him to give up and put her in the bath and get her ready for bed. He quickly popped the last of it in his own mouth and lifted Luc out of her highchair, kissing her cheeks on the way to the bathroom. “Well that was easy.” Ash said to Tori with relief across his face. “Now to battle your family!” Tori looked him in the eyes from his shoulder and smiled. She didn't need to say anything for him to know that at that point, everything was perfect. He lowered his head down and kissed her on the lips, wiping away the sauce of her food that she left behind.
Guest Posted January 2, 2018 Report Posted January 2, 2018 Great chapter Wonder how the Morgan’s will react to Tori moving in with Ash. Glad VJ is on board. Happy New Year Update again soon
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 2, 2018 Report Posted January 2, 2018 Hmm, hard to tell how Tori and Ash moving in together is going to go.Looking forward to finding out!
pembie Posted January 2, 2018 Report Posted January 2, 2018 I think I would class Raffy more mature than Tori So yes I don't think she will be that bothered about her moving in with Ash. Has Raffy interviewed Tori yet I can't remember? Maybe interview her before she leaves be abit harder to do so when she's loved up with Ash Oh Happy New Year too you..
Inactive User Posted January 3, 2018 Report Posted January 3, 2018 Great chapter Gonna be interesting about how the Morgans will react to Tori moving in with Ash Glad VJ is on board about it Update soon please xx
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