pembie Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 Maybe New Fish will become Alexei's new boyfriend. Then New Fish's story to Evie about having found someone new won't be so ridiculous Looks to be the start of another good story. I say try and make it a 28 chapters story to match Josh's prison sentence 3 Quote
KittCatt Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 Great chapter! Alexei sounds lovely doesn't he?! Way to end the chapter on a high note! Really liked Josh telling Kyle about everything that has happened in Summer Bay. Shame that Brax and everyone else have essentially forgotten about Kyle Nice to see Kyle continuing to support Josh though. And I liked that you explained how Josh found his new girlfriend Its certainly in character for him to lie about that, rather than actually find a new girlfriend while on the run Looking forward to more! 2 Quote
Guest Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 Great chapter loved Kyle and Josh chatting together Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 On 09/12/2016 at 02:40, pembie said: Maybe New Fish will become Alexei's new boyfriend. Then New Fish's story to Evie about having found someone new won't be so ridiculous Expand Im not sure New Fish would be all that keen on that idea . I mean, as seductive as Alexei is, with his never ending bowel movements and sexually threatening behaviour, I think Josh might still be a little too hung up on Evie to start something new right away... but who knows?! Alexei is a very persuasive man, apparently On 09/12/2016 at 02:44, KittCatt said: Alexei sounds lovely doesn't he?! Way to end the chapter on a high note! Expand Haha! yeah, Josh is having a lot of fun Thought things were getting a bit too cosy. You know the way my mind works, haha! On 09/12/2016 at 02:44, KittCatt said: Really liked Josh telling Kyle about everything that has happened in Summer Bay. Shame that Brax and everyone else have essentially forgotten about Kyle Nice to see Kyle continuing to support Josh though. And I liked that you explained how Josh found his new girlfriend Its certainly in character for him to lie about that, rather than actually find a new girlfriend while on the run Expand I wanted to give Josh the chance to explain himself. It's something the show never did. We're just meant to believe that Josh is some heartless little coward who didn't feel anything about killing Charlotte (mainly because he didn't know he'd done it until the big reveal). I wanted to give him a chance to explain the (frankly ridiculous) plotline of him going straight out and killing Charlotte, and why he didn't come forward. (I still don't believe that thats what he would have done, but here we are, so I'm making Lemonade.) On 09/12/2016 at 04:27, j.laur5 said: Great Chapter. Expand On 09/12/2016 at 07:00, Kristen said: loved Kyle and Josh chatting together Expand Thanks j.laur5 and Kristen, really glad you're both enjoying it! 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 Josh had a lot to explain to Kyle, didn't he?Looks like prison isn't going to be much fun for him... 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 9, 2016 Report Posted December 9, 2016 On 09/12/2016 at 09:06, Red Ranger 1 said: Josh had a lot to explain to Kyle, didn't he? Expand Yeah, kinda had to get that out of the way in this chapter and they kind of needed it to reestablish their friendship too. Now we can get into the real story... Quote
Suzza101 Posted December 10, 2016 Author Report Posted December 10, 2016 Great chapter I loved how Josh explained to Kyle everything that has gone on in Summer Bay, but I was extremely sad to hear that Brax and Heath don't really visit. Poor Kyle being locked up and abandoned wouldn't be much fun at all, at least he's got Josh now. Prison would be a pretty lonely place and I doubt that either of them would survive their time without having someone that they know with them. I really like how Kyle is there for Josh when Andy can't be, really shows that family man that he is, can't wait to read more please update soon. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted December 10, 2016 Report Posted December 10, 2016 Liked the chat between Kyle and Josh Looking fowards to the next chapter Xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted December 11, 2016 Report Posted December 11, 2016 Great chapter Seems like Kyle might be gay. Poor Josh! Update again soon Quote
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