KittCatt Posted December 14, 2016 Report Posted December 14, 2016 Great chapter! Wow, that scene in the showers was really quite awful. Was obviously very scary for Josh, and then he really did realise that he's essentially someone else's property...With the physical trauma, as well as the psychological, I'm not sure how much more he can take. So glad Brax can help. Ricky might not be happy but what did she expect? Continuing to love Kyle and Aaron And Kyle nearly told him he love him. I hope he'll get the chance again. Really looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 15, 2016 Report Posted December 15, 2016 On 14/12/2016 at 20:19, KittCatt said: Wow, that scene in the showers was really quite awful. Was obviously very scary for Josh, and then he really did realise that he's essentially someone else's property...With the physical trauma, as well as the psychological, I'm not sure how much more he can take. So glad Brax can help. Ricky might not be happy but what did she expect? Continuing to love Kyle and Aaron And Kyle nearly told him he love him. I hope he'll get the chance again. Expand Thanks KittCatt! Yeah, I think Josh would be on the verge of a breakdown if he hasn't already passed that point I have put him through an awful lot and he's only been there a week! The poor guy! Realising that Alexei had essentially claimed ownership of him would be particularly horrifying, especially combined with a second physical attack like that. He's really not having a good time. Glad you're enjoying the Kyle and Aaron relationship too (Kyron?)They are pretty sweet... I really wish the show would introduce a gay character or two, but that's a discussion for a different thread. As always, thanks for the feedback! x 1 Quote
christine king Posted December 15, 2016 Report Posted December 15, 2016 Just catching up on this story. Poor Josh, hes having such a bad time in jail, so sad! Kyle is playing protective big brother and its so damn amazing, love it. Can't wait for more update soon please. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 15, 2016 Report Posted December 15, 2016 On 15/12/2016 at 12:42, christine king said: Just catching up on this story. Poor Josh, hes having such a bad time in jail, so sad! Kyle is playing protective big brother and its so damn amazing, love it. Can't wait for more update soon please. Expand Awww, thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! It's quite a dark story but that tends to be where my mind leads me You'll have seen from the comments that I'm a huge fan of Josh and Kyle (and I really miss them in the show) so I thought if they both have to be in prison, it made sense for them to be together. I only intended it to be a short little 3 or 4 parter, but once I started writing, it took on a life of its own and has expanded out. It'll take a lot more chapters to tell it properly! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate it! x P.S. I should hopefully have a chapter up by tomorrow night! We'll see. Quote
christine king Posted December 17, 2016 Report Posted December 17, 2016 Awe so sweet with Kyle telling Aaron he loved him! Josh is in a world of trouble, lets hope Kyle and Brax save him soon. Ricky was super angry at Brax, I wonder what she will think after she learns the truth. Update again soon, please xx 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted December 17, 2016 Author Report Posted December 17, 2016 Great chapter. Awww Kyle finally said I love you to Aaron very sweet, I just hope that him and Brax will be able to help Josh before things get even worse for him and I hope that Ricky will understand once she hears the full story, can't wait to read more please update soon 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 17, 2016 Report Posted December 17, 2016 Sweet moment between Kyle and Aaron.Still not sure what Josh is planning...and a little glimpse of life outside. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 17, 2016 Report Posted December 17, 2016 On 17/12/2016 at 03:20, christine king said: Awe so sweet with Kyle telling Aaron he loved him! Expand On 17/12/2016 at 03:39, Suzza101 said: Awww Kyle finally said I love you to Aaron very sweet, Expand On 17/12/2016 at 08:58, Red Ranger 1 said: Sweet moment between Kyle and Aaron Expand Thanks guys! So glad you liked that little scene. I didn't want to overdo it and have him suddenly gushing 'I love yous' but I suppose it was a turning point for them. Just a pity it had to happen so close to Aaron's release date. How do you just let someone go? On 17/12/2016 at 03:20, christine king said: Josh is in a world of trouble, lets hope Kyle and Brax save him soon. Expand On 17/12/2016 at 03:39, Suzza101 said: I just hope that him and Brax will be able to help Josh before things get even worse for him Expand Yeah, things aren't looking great for poor Josh, are they?! He's having a tough old time of it. Still, at least he's in hospital and not locked in a cell with Cuddles for the time being. Every cloud... On 17/12/2016 at 08:58, Red Ranger 1 said: Still not sure what Josh is planning. Expand Yeah, whether it's a good plan or not remains to be seen. Thanks for reading everyone! 1 Quote
Guest Posted December 17, 2016 Report Posted December 17, 2016 Great chapter Aww Kyle finally told Aaron he loves him. poor Josh. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted December 17, 2016 Report Posted December 17, 2016 On 17/12/2016 at 13:34, Kristen said: Aww Kyle finally told Aaron he loves him. poor Josh. Expand Thanks Kristen, glad you liked it! I think it would be hard for Kyle to say those words. Being in a gay relationship is a shock in itself but putting himself out there like this, and saying those words, is extra difficult because he's going to lose him. So sad for him. Thanks for reading x Quote
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