Ludub Posted June 8, 2017 Report Posted June 8, 2017 Chris and Brody aren't in it either, and neither is Aden so they're probably safe enough! Lol! Quote
pembie Posted June 8, 2017 Report Posted June 8, 2017 Chris and Brody are you sure? I think you will find they are trapped in a world filled with zombies and aliens 1 Quote
KIMIF1 Posted June 12, 2017 Report Posted June 12, 2017 Thanks again Ludub for another enthralling chapter, have only just caught up. I would be surprised if we have really seen the end of Heath - I have the feeling he will reappear with a very sore head, it is only a shallow grave after all. Feel so sorry for Kyle and Josh, they will be so scarred for life by what they have been through and would need years of counselling - that is if they even survive. Sad about Dimitri but he wasn't much help to them anyway, they say worms will turn and Mark certainly did poor soul - at least that's one monster out of the way and who wont be troubling Kyle and Josh any more, You really are a great storyteller, look forward to the next chapter and what that brings. 2 Quote
christine king Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 Feel so sorry for Josh and Kyle! Ricky and Brax really need to find Heath asap. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 The boys continue to be in deep doo doo and their only hope is the Keystone Cops.Really not been a good week for them... 1 Quote
pembie Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 (edited) Firstly the little mention of The Stallion Tamer’ at the start You don't know how I laughed at that I can't think why Most of that chapter was amusing Agent Lee being very useful as ever Brax and Ricky should just go all Rambo style and sort this mess out Josh might be blind oh dear but at least he won't see the rapists coming now Is that a good thing? Oh and he is right to think that the doctor may just run out of paper A few months a few months he can't truly make 28 years ha funny Agent Ricci and Agent Lewis they so wanted to get into each others pants flirting much Shame they can't now given their dead.. So glad the babe Doris isn't dead Smithy is a lucky man... Oh and how dare Agent Lewis think Doris looks like a MAN I am truly shocked I do love this story it makes my day night Edited June 13, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 Great chapter Looks like Josh must be going blind. Poor guy! He had been through enough. Liked the mention of the Stallion Tamer Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted June 13, 2017 Report Posted June 13, 2017 Great chapter Feel so sorry for Kyle and Josh. Smithy isn't a very nice man killing Agent Ricci and Agent Lewis. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted June 14, 2017 Report Posted June 14, 2017 On 13/06/2017 at 14:11, christine king said: Feel so sorry for Josh and Kyle! Expand On 13/06/2017 at 16:26, Red Ranger 1 said: The boys continue to be in deep doo doo and their only hope is the Keystone Cops.Really not been a good week for them... Expand On 13/06/2017 at 22:45, Kristen said: Feel so sorry for Kyle and Josh. Expand On 13/06/2017 at 21:09, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Looks like Josh must be going blind. Poor guy! He had been through enough. Expand On 13/06/2017 at 17:42, pembie said: Josh might be blind oh dear but at least he won't see the rapists coming now Is that a good thing? Oh and he is right to think that the doctor may just run out of paper A few months a few months he can't truly make 28 years ha funny Expand Thanks guys! Yeah, I'm really not very kind to my boys, am I?! They've had a hard few months and it might be about to get worse! I've said it before and I'll say it again... You'd be forgiven for thinking that I hated Kyle and Josh. I really don't. They're my favourites! lol! On 13/06/2017 at 17:42, pembie said: Firstly the little mention of The Stallion Tamer’ at the start You don't know how I laughed at that I can't think why Expand Hahaha! I won't lie, that bit was for you! On 13/06/2017 at 17:42, pembie said: So glad the babe Doris isn't dead Smithy is a lucky man... Oh and how dare Agent Lewis think Doris looks like a MAN I am truly shocked Expand Had to bring her back. She was too much fun not to make a second appearance! On 13/06/2017 at 17:42, pembie said: I do love this story it makes my day night Expand Aww! Thanks! You'll make me blush! On 13/06/2017 at 22:45, Kristen said: Smithy isn't a very nice man killing Agent Ricci and Agent Lewis. Expand Haha! Very true! Not a very nice man at all! Thanks for all the kind comments peeps! I'll try to have a new chapter in a day or two! x 1 Quote
bijou Posted June 16, 2017 Report Posted June 16, 2017 Interesting stuff yet again the whole Josh thing was done really well 1 Quote
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