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Yeah, not sure trying to get Josh to talk was exactly the right move...Ricky seemed to get through the exchange okay but will Smithy keep us his side of the bargain?And is Josh in as much trouble as ever? Looking forward to more!

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26 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Yeah, not sure trying to get Josh to talk was exactly the right move...Ricky seemed to get through the exchange okay but will Smithy keep us his side of the bargain?And is Josh in as much trouble as ever? Looking forward to more!

Thanks Red :) Yeah, I'm not sure pressuring someone to talk (especially so soon after the assault) is that great an idea either. People tend to shut down and that's probably a natural defence mechanism. Making them talk before they're ready could be very traumatic. You'll just have to wait to see what happens with Smithy and Vasily :wink: Oh... and Happy New Year! 

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Great chapter

Josh shouldn't talk so soon in time maybe he will.

Ricky did well with the exchange.

Whoa at the end.

Update again soon :)

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Great chapter I really loved it.Josh shouldn't talk so soon in time maybe he will if he's not ready it wouldn't be a good idea to talk. I'm glad that Ricky did well with the exchange I was a bit worried. Whoa at the end. It doesn't look good. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon 

 
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1 hour ago, Kristen said:

Ricky did well with the exchange.

 

32 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

Whoa at the end. It doesn't look good.

Thanks both of you! :) Glad you enjoyed it. The exchange certainly didn’t play out the way Ricky expected, but for now at least things appear to be on track... and I'm glad you liked the ending, I do like to leave things on a cliffhanger! :wink: 

Happy New Year to both of you too! :)

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I'm liking how Ricky was thrown into the mix I'm suprised she agreed, It might do her good to get that strap on.. Might come in handy if she crosses paths with Smithy again.. I don't know if you could knock someone out or cause them harm if you were to use a strap on as a weapon though. :lol:

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