Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[Suzza101]

Great chapter. How could Brax and Heath act that way, Kyle's their little brother and Heath was laughing. They were both trying to try and convince themselves that it wasn't true. Brax was even struggling to call Aaron, Kyle's boyfriend. I found it sad how they weren't there for their little brother. Poor Kyle but I feel like a visit from Bianca and Ricky might help they will be a lot more understanding. I'm really glad that Keith will try to help Josh to help him get in the right path. Can't wait to read more please update soon. 

[Ludub]

1 hour ago, Kristen said:

Brax and Heath didn't react that well to Kyle being gay.

 

21 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

How could Brax and Heath act that way, Kyle's their little brother and Heath was laughing. They were both trying to try and convince themselves that it wasn't true. Brax was even struggling to call Aaron, Kyle's boyfriend. I found it sad how they weren't there for their little brother. Poor Kyle but I feel like a visit from Bianca and Ricky might help they will be a lot more understanding.

I don't think Brax and Heath would mean any harm but I don't think they'd have the faintest clue how to react either. Heath is laughing, but it's a nervous reaction, not a genuine case of mockery. He just doesn't know how to deal with it. A bit childish but not deliberately cruel. Still, not exactly the level of support that Kyle needs right now. Thanks for reading! x

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Shocked at how Brax and Heath reacted to the news that Kyle is gay. 

Liked how Keith is going to help Josh get in the right path

Update soon please xx

[Ludub]

5 minutes ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked how Keith is going to help Josh get in the right path

Probably not what he was expecting from a chat with the welfare officer! 

Thanks for reading! x

[Red Ranger 1]

Brax and Heath's reaction feels very in character.I agree that they're not really equipped to understand it even though they still want to help.Smith is turning more and more nasty but it seems he and everyone else have broken Josh so much that there's nothing left for him to be scared of, and he might have actually found a useful ally at last.

[christine king]

Brax and Heath didn't react well at all did they.

Josh is going to help the feds then, lets hope they are more useful than the cops in summer bay.

Update soon please.

[Ludub]

12 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Brax and Heath's reaction feels very in character

Thanks Red!  I'm really pleased you thought so. I don't think Brax and Heath would be the most 'modern' men in their outlook but I was trying to find a balance here. They do care about Kyle so I don't think they'd disown him or start slinging homophobic insults about, but I'm not sure they'd find it that easy to accept either. Glad it seemed believable enough so.

4 hours ago, christine king said:

Josh is going to help the feds then, lets hope they are more useful than the cops in summer bay.

To be fair, I don't think anyone could be as useless or inept as the cops in Summer Bay! Fingers crossed for Josh, eh?! 

Thanks both of you for reading! x

[pembie]

Up untill Evil Evie turned out to be Smithy I was finding her quite hot is that wrong?

Cut Josh a deal say yes Josh for the love of God say yes sounds like his way out So jump like a kangaroo at that offer I should 

Brax getting in a huff about Kyle trying to kiss Ricky and she saying Well you were dead

[Ludub]

48 minutes ago, pembie said:

Up untill Evil Evie turned out to be Smithy I was finding her quite hot is that wrong?

Cut Josh a deal say yes Josh for the love of God say yes sounds like his way out So jump like a kangaroo at that offer I should 

Brax getting in a huff about Kyle trying to kiss Ricky and she saying Well you were dead

Again, interesting taste in women, Pembie! haha! 

Yeah, I think Josh might just be a little crazy if he passes this offer up! 

...And Ricky has a point, doesn't she?! Dead men don't get to be annoyed when their girlfriends hook up with other people! hahaha!  It's hard to argue with that. I like to think that she uses that to shut down any argument with Brax. "Oh, yeah?! ...Well, you were dead!" lol!

Thanks for always finding the funny. You do make me laugh! 

 

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Glad Kyle let Ricky in and let her hug him 

Still feel sorry for Josh

update again soon