Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

11 hours ago, Ludub said:

Wow!  17 years?! That is some commitment!!! You might as well have raised a child. 

Yes, although a child where I don't know where they are most of the time and can't remember what they told me that morning...

[Guest]

Great chapter

Poor Josh I feel sorry for him.

I hope Kyle and Brax and Ricky will help Josh.

Update again soon

[Red Ranger 1]

Ah okay, so Josh has ended up back in jail and he is sharing a cell with Kyle after all, although Smithy's making it as difficult as possible... There seems to be some sort of plan in the offing, and on the right side of the law as well, but what is it and will it work?

[Ludub]

10 hours ago, Kristen said:

I hope Kyle and Brax and Ricky will help Josh.

8 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

There seems to be some sort of plan in the offing, and on the right side of the law as well, but what is it and will it work?

Thanks both of you  There is a plan but you'll have to wait and see whether it works out or not  Thanks for reading peeps! x

[Suzza101]

Great couple of chapters, Poor both Kyle and Josh. Firstly Kyle for when Ricky came to visit and he was just so upset in the last chapter I really hope that he'll turn out okay and I hope he'll stop getting angry at his family as much as they deserve it for not visiting in so long, but he needs them. 

 

And Josh oh no it's just horrible, at least he's with Kyle,  hoping that Kyle will be able to protect him and get the money to Smithy with everyone's help because I'm pretty sure he gave the last of his money to help Josh last time.  I really hope that they will both be okay. They are both struggling in their own ways with sharing a cell, even if it is with each other. I really hope that they will be able to help each other, 

Can't wait to read more please update soon. 

[Ludub]

25 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

They are both struggling in their own ways with sharing a cell, even if it is with each other. I really hope that they will be able to help each other

Thanks Suzza!  So glad you enjoyed the chapters! Kyle and Josh are obviously suffering in very different ways and neither of them are that good at talking about things. It should have been a relief for both of them to find that they're now sharing a cell with a friendly face, but Smithy has put such a negative spin on things, that they're both unable to see that. Josh has a plan but it's still to be seen how that works out for him. Thanks for reading! x

[pembie]

Its a very odd image to have in my head of Brax playing toy cars and going voom voom I have to say... But the Feds are here now so yes I'm sure they will brightened his life up for awhile now..

I hope Smithy gets whats coming to him I don't like him at all What a twathead

Edited March 4, 2017 by pembie

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Felt for Josh

Hoping Kyle will be able to protect Josh and find a way to get the money to Smithy 

Update soon please Xx

[Ludub]

On 04/03/2017 at 0:35 AM, pembie said:

Its a very odd image to have in my head of Brax playing toy cars and going voom voom I have to say...

Haha! Yeah, not exactly the image of Brax that everyone's used to!  I can't imagine him being all that engaged a dad to be honest. 

On 04/03/2017 at 7:39 PM, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Hoping Kyle will be able to protect Josh and find a way to get the money to Smithy 

On 04/03/2017 at 0:35 AM, pembie said:

I hope Smithy gets whats coming to him I don't like him at all What a twathead

Smithy is a pretty nasty character (although he is a lot of fun to write ) You'll have to wait and see how things unfold...

Thanks for reading guys x

[christine king]

Great chapter

Smithy keeping his word? yeah I don't trust him as far as I could throw him.

Josh and Kyle in the same cell is a good thing, it just sucks they both are struggling.

The feds want to talk about Josh to Brax and Ricky, oh snap lets hope this goes well.