Ludub Posted March 8, 2017 Report Posted March 8, 2017 (edited) On 07/03/2017 at 2:42 PM, christine king said: Smithy keeping his word? yeah I don't trust him as far as I could throw him. You might be wise not to Much like Donald Trump, when a person feels the need to say 'trust me', they're usually lying! Thanks for reading! x Note for everyone reading: I realised that I put the two sections of the last chapter the wrong way round. In terms of timelines, Brax and Ricky's bit should have come first. It was earlier in the evening, and the boys were heading to bed later on. I've changed it now. Sorry! Edited March 8, 2017 by Ludub Quote
Guest Posted March 9, 2017 Report Posted March 9, 2017 Great chapter Wonder what Brax will do about the Feds Poor Josh liked Kyle trying to help him. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted March 10, 2017 Report Posted March 10, 2017 Great chapter Felt for Josh in this chapter Liked how Kyle tried to help him Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 10, 2017 Report Posted March 10, 2017 That does indeed seem like a good deal that Brax has been offered, whatever his part in it... Good that Kyle was there for Josh despite his hostility. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 10, 2017 Report Posted March 10, 2017 (edited) 15 hours ago, Kristen said: Poor Josh liked Kyle trying to help him. 12 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Liked how Kyle tried to help him 8 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Good that Kyle was there for Josh despite his hostility I think Josh is probably good for Kyle too. It gives him something to focus on, other than Aaron. 8 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: That does indeed seem like a good deal that Brax has been offered, whatever his part in it. Indeed. But would they have bothered bringing charges against him if they didn't need his help? Maybe this is just blatant blackmail? In any case, it looks like he doesn't really have a choice! Thanks for reading guys! x Edited March 10, 2017 by Ludub Quote
pembie Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 I have always thought that maybe Josh would become Top Dog and have control of the prison and everyone esle would come to fear him..Given the riot and Alexi.. So maybe.. I did think though that Josh's mind had finally snapped when he was seeing Andy.. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 9 hours ago, pembie said: I have always thought that maybe Josh would become Top Dog and have control of the prison and everyone esle would come to fear him..Given the riot and Alexi.. So maybe.. I did think though that Josh's mind had finally snapped when he was seeing Andy.. Yeah, I can see it now! Josh as a sort of Godfather type character, running the prison... maybe not, haha! This dream was kind of all of Josh's fears rolled into one (I'm so kind to him, aren't I?! ). Blindness and paralysis, like when he woke up in hospital, and being totally powerless while being raped. Pretty terrifying. It made sense that he'd look to Andy for help (even if it was only in his subconscious) because he's the only thing he has left. Now he has Kyle though. Every cloud... 1 Quote
pembie Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 Oh I thought that you were dropping a hints or a clue when you put nobody had stepped up to take control of the prison yet I thought oooh a job for Josh 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted March 11, 2017 Author Report Posted March 11, 2017 Great chapter, I'm glad that Kyle was there for josh and he's making sure that he looks after himself by making sure he eats, even though he tried to push him away at times. I wonder what will happen with Brax and the Fed, I can't wait to read more please update soon. 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 Great chapter I really feel for Josh. Wonder what Smithy is up to whatever it is doesn't look good. Update again soon Quote
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