Red Ranger 1 Posted March 11, 2017 Report Posted March 11, 2017 Hmm... Is Keith in on whatever deal the Feds have got going on? Interested to see what happens next! 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted March 12, 2017 Report Posted March 12, 2017 Great chapter Wondering what is Smithy up to next...? Really curious about Keith. Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 1 Quote
christine king Posted March 12, 2017 Report Posted March 12, 2017 Just catching up. I'm worried that Keith isn't out to help Josh like he claims but is out to help himself instead. Brax is not and have never been a drug dealer! that was Heath Smithy wants to find out all about the Braxtons, this is not good. Update soon please 1 Quote
pembie Posted March 13, 2017 Report Posted March 13, 2017 (edited) Smithy and Alexi were sharing and raping the male prisoners to have power over them?............Yeah right of course Smithy's in some sort of denial here I think.. Dear lord his gay as well I'm all for him trying to find out about the Braxtons.. I wouldn't totally agree that Brax is that clever though But he would do anything to save his family So hopefully Brax hasn't mushed his brain that much from vrooming to many toy cars and Smithy will meet his match and a very sticky end.. Do you like Smithy? I very much hope you do Keith seems to be quite the slippery snake too... God they all are in this prison Edited March 13, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 13, 2017 Report Posted March 13, 2017 Thanks everyone for reading Things might become a bit more clear in the next few chapters... I'm not gonna say much more cos I don't want to ruin the story... 5 hours ago, pembie said: Smithy and Alexi were sharing and raping the male prisoners to have power over them?............Yeah right of course Smithy's in some sort of denial here I think.. Dear lord his gay as well Smithy isn't gay. There's a line in Shawshank Redemption that always stays in my mind: Morgan Freeman says the rapists going after Andy Dufresne "aren't gay. They'd have to be human first". I think Smithy and Alexei are just opportunistic predators. It's not about sex, its about power (and cruelty). Quote
Suzza101 Posted March 13, 2017 Author Report Posted March 13, 2017 Great chapter, I hope that Keith will actually help Josh I'm not liking the idea of Smithy wanting to find out more about the Braxton's. I can't wait to read more Please update soon 1 Quote
bijou Posted March 15, 2017 Report Posted March 15, 2017 I find this story intriguing I'm sorry I don't comment as much as I should 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 15, 2017 Report Posted March 15, 2017 On 13/03/2017 at 8:14 PM, Suzza101 said: I'm not liking the idea of Smithy wanting to find out more about the Braxton's. Thanks Suzza! Glad you're enjoying it. The question is, what will he find out? 21 minutes ago, bijou said: I find this story intriguing I'm sorry I don't comment as much as I should Thanks Bijou. Didn't realise you were reading this one. Glad you're enjoying it too Hope to have a new chapter in the next day or two. Been a bit busy (sorry!) 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 17, 2017 Report Posted March 17, 2017 Great chapter Poor Josh doing it rough. Kyle still talking to ghost Aaron. Wonder what will happen next with Smithy and Johnno. Update again soon Quote
bijou Posted March 17, 2017 Report Posted March 17, 2017 I never really liked Josh when he was on the show but you've made him likeable in this story congratulations on that 1 Quote
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