Inactive User Posted March 23, 2017 Report Posted March 23, 2017 Great chapter Liked the idea of Brax as a drug dealer Good thing that Josh didn't take the drugs Update soon please Xx 1 Quote
Ludub Posted March 23, 2017 Report Posted March 23, 2017 11 hours ago, Suzza101 said: I'm really glad that josh didn't take the drugs. I'm not sure that I'd have hesitated as long as Josh did! Kwon basically handed him an out. I think I might have taken it. 2 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Liked the idea of Brax as a drug dealer A make believe drug dealer but will he be able to convince Smithy? Thanks for reading! Unfortunately, it might be a good few days before I have a new chapter. I'm a bit busy at the moment. Sorry! Quote
christine king Posted March 27, 2017 Report Posted March 27, 2017 Just catching up. Really glad Josh didn't take the drugs but now he has to find a way to pay for them Update soon please 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 31, 2017 Report Posted March 31, 2017 That's a pretty risky plan that Kyle's come up with, hopefully it'll work out... Nice that Kyle and Josh are managing to support each other at last. 1 Quote
Guest Posted March 31, 2017 Report Posted March 31, 2017 Great chapter felt sorry for Josh! Glad Kyle could comfort Josh. I hope their plan works. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 Great chapter Liked how Kyle was there to comfort Josh Hoping their plan better work but I get a bad feeling it may backfire somehow Update soon please xx 1 Quote
pembie Posted April 1, 2017 Report Posted April 1, 2017 I can tell that you wrote this while being on holiday basking in the sunshine as you put it... Were there parallels to where you were and Arraon's garden centre dream world? Then to find Josh vomiting into the toilet that brought back how annoying having a roomate really is Sounds like Kyle plans on getting himself killed to save everyone though... Spoiler I think clever way to bookend things be a good ending. 1 Quote
bijou Posted April 2, 2017 Report Posted April 2, 2017 Awesome stuff as usual i don't mind that takes a while to update but I however can't say I'm not anxious to find out what happens next 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 4, 2017 Report Posted April 4, 2017 Nice thought of Kyle's to tip Brax off (and is he getting a bit overly fond of Josh?).Ricky's got a point about Brax, he needs to let go of the desire to give all the orders. 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted April 4, 2017 Author Report Posted April 4, 2017 (edited) Great couple of chapters... I LOVE THE KYLE AND JOSH FRIENDSHIP! Im a bit worried that something is going to go wrong, and either Kyle or Josh are going to get hurt. Maybe smithies going to start treating Kyle like he does Josh. I hope not and I really hope that the boys can help before something goes terribly wrong (Backtrack to the last chapter. I felt so sorry for Kyle when he found out that it was all a dream and how it ended too soon, he's really missing Aaron and I don't know how he will be handling things. Probably not well as he's already acting weird.) Edited April 4, 2017 by Suzza101 1 Quote
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