Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[Ludub]

2 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Ricky's got a point about Brax, he needs to let go of the desire to give all the orders.

Yeah, I don't think Brax would do well with taking orders, even if it is from the Feds. He always wants to be the one calling the shots.

2 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

(and is he getting a bit overly fond of Josh?).

38 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

I LOVE THE KYLE AND JOSH FRIENDSHIP

Awww! Thanks! I'm glad. They are actually pretty cute together, even if it is all a bit confused at the moment. Josh doesn't really know what he wants. On the one hand, he's pretty traumatised so his instinct is to push Kyle away, and on the other, he really needs someone to comfort him and make him feel protected. It's a constant push /pull. And then there's Kyle who just feels lost and alone without Aaron, and is latching onto Josh as a result.

Thanks both of you for your comments I'll post the second chapter tomorrow! 

 

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked the friendship between Kyle and Josh

Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

 

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Loved Kyle and Josh becoming friends.

I hope the plan works 

Update again soon

[Guest]

Great chapter 

I am really liking the friendship between Kyle and Josh.

I hope the boys will be okay.

Update again soon

[j.laur5]

Did anyone notched when Josh was living with Braxton's Kyle was only that borthed taking care of Josh?. 

[Red Ranger 1]

Ohh boy, Kyle and Josh seem to be seriously out of their depth and chances are this is not going to end well...

[Suzza101]

Great chapter.

Ohno this doesn't look good at all, it looks like they are going to get hurt or worse... very brave of both of them though. Josh for talking back at them and Kyle for facing them off. But have a bad feeling that it wasn't such a good idea, sounds like their in for a lot of pain. 

Im both intrigued and nervous but am looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait!! 

Please update soon. 

[Ludub]

9 hours ago, Kristen said:

I hope the boys will be okay.

8 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Ohh boy, Kyle and Josh seem to be seriously out of their depth and chances are this is not going to end well...

7 hours ago, Suzza101 said:

Ohno this doesn't look good at all, it looks like they are going to get hurt or worse... very brave of both of them though. Josh for talking back at them and Kyle for facing them off. But have a bad feeling that it wasn't such a good idea, sounds like their in for a lot of pain

Yeah, they have gotten themselves into quite the mess, haven't they?!  Kyle really didn't think this through at all. He might not be seeing Aaron anymore but I'm not sure he's thinking all that rationally...

Hopefully you won't have to wait too long to find out what happens! 

9 hours ago, j.laur5 said:

Did anyone notched when Josh was living with Braxton's Kyle was only that borthed taking care of Josh?. 

I'm not sure I remember too much about that time to be honest. You think Kyle took more to do with him than the others did? I do remember that scene when he was getting ready for the formal. It was very cute. It really felt like they were treating him as part of the family.

Thanks for reading guys.

Edited April 6, 2017 by Ludub

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Oh dear! I wonder what is going to happen next for Kyle and Josh

Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

[bijou]

You really know how to leave you're chapters on a cliffhanger 

once again you written a great chapter

great work can't wait for the next one