Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[Guest]

Great chapter 

Brax pushing the boys to find out who beat them up.

Wonder where Heath went.

Update again soon

[Ludub]

20 hours ago, pembie said:

Love the fact that Josh and Kyle didn't put it past Brax to rat himself out because he needed more than toy cars in his life..

Haha! Thought you might like that!  He does have to get his kicks somewhere doesn't he?!

20 hours ago, pembie said:

Heath can step forward his time of suffering begins now 

Now, would I do that to Heath?! 

21 hours ago, pembie said:

Heath won't be there for a the 3D baby scan either.. I have never heard of those My 3D imagey isn't that great are they impressive?

They are pretty impressive actually! Like really freaky! You can see the baby's whole face in perfect detail.

20 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Loved the characterisation of Heath as someone who'd rather just be at home with his family and forget all about this drug dealer nonsense

Maybe I'm giving Heath too much credit but I like to think that he's grown up a lot and I'd hope that having another baby on the way (especially after Rocco) would make him want to be more responsible. Obviously in this reality, the specials never happened, so there's been no Gunno kidnapping Bianca, or any climbing through air conditioning shafts. He's been living a family life with the woman he loves and hasn't felt the need to go looking for crime filled excitement.

20 hours ago, Kristen said:

Brax pushing the boys to find out who beat them up.

Yeah, can't imagine Brax letting things go without an answer.

Thanks for reading folks! 

[bijou]

Once again I enjoyed the chapter

Brax pushing Kyle and Josh to find who beat them up that was very Brax what I liked about it is Kyle refused to tell him that's very Kyle 

change of plans usually means someone's heading into a trap

looking forward to more

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Liked how Brax pushed the boys to find out who gave them a beating

Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx

[christine king]

Great chapter.

Oh a change of plan is never a good thing..

Update soon please.

[Suzza101]

Great chapter, omg!!! Poor Kyle and Josh, they sound like they are so broken and terrified. Brax not being able to recognise Josh until he saw Kyle is just tragic. Kyle jumpiness obviously didn't go unnoticed to Brax.. wonder what Brax will say when he finds out about the rape he won't be too happy at all when he finds out what happened to his  little brother and I have a feeling it will all come out eventually with a Big Bang. That 3D thing sounds very interesting, oh no a change of plan.. that's not the least bit good. Please update soon, can't wait to read the next chapter.  

Edited April 29, 2017 by Suzza101

[Guest]

Great chapter

Feel sorry for Kyle and Josh.

oh no what has Brax got himself into?

Update again soon

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh boy, things are not going well.Kyle and Josh are having to do something they really don't want to, while Brax and Heath are very much in the swanny.Where are all the nice people?

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Oh dear! Can't believe the mess Brax got himself into!

Update soon please xx

 

[pembie]

Oh I don't like Dimitri at all. Is he one of your favourite characters? hopefully he is

Oh dear me someone esle is WEARING HEATH'S LEATHER JACKET!!!!!!!!!!! Where has he gone?

Agent Lee isn't very good is he? He should have given Brax a wire to wear or something I guess Brax now has no other choice now but to sit and eat chicken wings while he ponders on what his next move will be.. Has he brought any money with him to place some bets on the dogs that might past the time aswell haha

another great chapter