Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[KittCatt]

Great chapter!

Kyle and Aaron are very sweet!  Very cute together. And I continue to love how much Kyle cares about Josh. Getting himself beaten up for him? Going to prison in the first place to protect a women he barely knew? Kyle is certainly selfless. But he still can't say the words I love You  Maybe he'll be able to just before Aaron leaves?

Josh's attitude is what you would expect all things considered. Hope Kyle's plan works out..

Looking forward to more!  

[Suzza101]

Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Kyle got himself beaten up just to see Josh it really shows how much he cares about Josh, he dilbertly got himself in a fight just so he could make Josh feel better. Poor Josh though I really hope that Kyle does manage to get Josh out of the cell with cuddles. Kyle and Aaron are adorable I just hope that Kyle will express that he does love him. I hope that he will say those three words, he seems really nervous about seeing Brax and I find it quiet sad that Brax has cancelled on him the last complete of times, how is that meant to make him feel? I'm so glad that Aaron was there to support him. When Aaron leaves I really hope that him and Kyle will stay together and that Kyle will be able to tell his brothers about it. Can't wait to read more, please update soon. 

[Ludub]

18 minutes ago, pembie said:

Kyle being gay though yeaah there's nothing wrong with that But I bet his kicking himself inside for going to prison for Isla now

Probably just a bit, because it was the ultimate in 'doing something to make the girl like me' stupidity  Now it turns out he should have been trying to impress the boys! haha!

2 minutes ago, KittCatt said:

Kyle and Aaron are very sweet!  Very cute together. And I continue to love how much Kyle cares about Josh. Getting himself beaten up for him? Going to prison in the first place to protect a women he barely knew? Kyle is certainly selfless. But he still can't say the words I love You  Maybe he'll be able to just before Aaron leaves?.

Yeah, I always saw Kyle as excessively selfless to the point of ridiculous. He was always getting mixed up in things because he wanted the Braxton boys to love him and count him as one of them. Ricky used him all the time and he let her. Everyone in that family just used him when they needed something and then he'd be left out of the fun stuff all the time and forgotten about. I think getting beaten up to help Josh isn't beyond the realms of possibility for someone like him. 'I love you' to a man might just be something that it's going to take him some time to get his head around. Only problem is, he only has 3 weeks!

[pembie]

Chapter 4

Oh I'm sure Brax won't need much convincing to help out he isn't the type to live the quiet life Always has to have some danger to it 

Nice scene with Kyle and  Aaron Nice tender moment for them both.. But you seem to like Aaron need I say more

Edited December 12, 2016 by pembie

[Ludub]

3 minutes ago, Suzza101 said:

Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Kyle got himself beaten up just to see Josh it really shows how much he cares about Josh, he dilbertly got himself in a fight just so he could make Josh feel better. Poor Josh though I really hope that Kyle does manage to get Josh out of the cell with cuddles. Kyle and Aaron are adorable I just hope that Kyle will express that he does love him. I hope that he will say those three words, he seems really nervous about seeing Brax and I find it quiet sad that Brax has cancelled on him the last complete of times, how is that meant to make him feel? I'm so glad that Aaron was there to support him. When Aaron leaves I really hope that him and Kyle will stay together and that Kyle will be able to tell his brothers about it. Can't wait to read more, please update soon. 

They are pretty sweet together aren't they?  Sadly, Aaron is leaving, so it's going to be a terrible wrench for Kyle when he goes. Saying I love you to someone when you know you're going to lose them would be incredibly hard. So glad you enjoyed it! x

Just now, pembie said:

Oh I'm sure Brax won't need much convincing to help out he isn't the type to live the quiet life always has to have a elemet of danger to it 

Nice scene with Kyle and  Aaron Nice tender moment for them both.. But you seem to like Aaron need I say more

You've noticed a pattern then? haha! True, so very true  You'll just have to wait and see.

And I think you're right about Brax. I couldn't see him living some humdrum life doing ordinary boring things. He'll probably be chomping at the bit to get at this prison guard! haha! 

[Guest]

Great chapter

loved Kyle acting like  a big brother to Josh and getting himself beat up.

Loved Kyle and Aaron together

Update again soon

[Red Ranger 1]

Kyle went to...fairly extreme lengths to help Josh.Wonder what it was that he passed him...

[Ludub]

6 hours ago, Kristen said:

Loved Kyle acting like  a big brother to Josh and getting himself beat up.

  

3 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Kyle went to...fairly extreme lengths to help Josh.Wonder what it was that he passed him...

Thanks both of you

I know it was a bit extreme but I've probably been influenced a bit by 'Prison Break' if I'm honest, lol! It's like something that Michael Scofield would have done, haha!  I don't plan on revealing that he's got the plans to the prison tattooed on his body though!

[Suzza101]

Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Aaron and Kyle had spent the night together but it must be hard for them to have to hide it from everyone, because of the danger of being in prison where I'm sure there are a lot of homophobes. Sad to hear that Kyle was being given grief from Gunno and his crew before Gunno  left and I thought that Brax would be more sympathetic towards Kyle because he was the one that made an enemy of those guys in the first place. I wish that Kyle will be able to tell Brax about Aaron even though there could be dangers. I found it awful to hear that Heath hadn't even seen Kyle in nearly 6 months how exactly is that meant to make Kyle feel. Kyle seeing Casey and nearly crying was so sad, he did practically raise him through the baby years and he will nearly be a teenager when when Kyle gets out. Poor Josh, Alexei sounds horrible, he is just awful, he's very creepy as well it make shivers go down my back Josh needs to get out of there as soon as possible. I really hope that Kyle will be able to get the money from Brax so that he will be able to help Josh before things go from bad to worse, I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon. xx

[Guest]

Great chapter

Loved Aaron and Kyle sleeping together.

Felt sorry for Josh.

Update again soon