Ludub Posted June 16, 2017 Report Posted June 16, 2017 6 hours ago, bijou said: Interesting stuff yet again the whole Josh thing was done really well Glad you're enjoying it Bijou! Quote
Suzza101 Posted June 19, 2017 Author Report Posted June 19, 2017 Great chapter. Looks like the boys are not the least bit good, I feel so sorry for them. In there without their brothers and dealing with this all must be so hard and they are going to need losts of help to get past this. I hope that everyone else will come out safe as well because at the moment it's not looking promising. Cant wait to read more, please update soon. 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 As Josh said, things can always get worse... So, a lot of non-descripts have been killed, Heath seems to be dead as well, Josh and Kyle are hostages and wanted fugitives and Brax is really going to have to pull something out of the bag.Not looking good at all... 1 Quote
bijou Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 You've got me wondering if this is in the vein of Don Winslow's Savages in it opened with the line "just because I'm telling you this story does not mean I'm alive at the end of it it's just one of those stories that got so out of control" everyone's in their own fair share of trouble it'll be a miracle for them to get out of it however as always exciting stuff 1 Quote
Guest Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 Great chapter Heath seems to be dead. Smithy taking Kyle and Josh hostaged. Update again soon Quote
pembie Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 Oh I was hoping that somehow it was Heath that had gotten to Kyle and Joshs prison van and he was just playing dead in that grave But he really does seem to be dead 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 Great chapter Sounds like Heath is dead. Poor guy! Update soon please xx 1 Quote
christine king Posted June 27, 2017 Report Posted June 27, 2017 Great Heath's dead and Smithy has Kyle and Josh. Brax is in trouble too. 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted June 28, 2017 Author Report Posted June 28, 2017 Great chapter. Heath must really be dead ? Now Smithie has Josh and Kyle! How much more can those two take. Brax is being lead into danger, I can just feel it. I can't wait to read more, please update soon. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Thanks everyone for taking the time to comment! As always, I really appreciate the feedback. You guys are great! I apologise for the big gaps in posting - I have the next chapter half-written, so I should have it ready to go by tomorrow night (hopefully!) 1 Quote
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