Red Ranger 1 Posted December 13, 2016 Report Posted December 13, 2016 Pity that Kyle can't tell his family about Aaron, but very in character.Josh is still having a hard time with Alexei, I wonder what Plan B is... 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 13, 2016 Report Posted December 13, 2016 8 hours ago, Suzza101 said: Amazing chapter, I love it. I loved how Aaron and Kyle had spent the night together but it must be hard for them to have to hide it from everyone, because of the danger of being in prison where I'm sure there are a lot of homophobes. Sad to hear that Kyle was being given grief from Gunno and his crew before Gunno left and I thought that Brax would be more sympathetic towards Kyle because he was the one that made an enemy of those guys in the first place. I wish that Kyle will be able to tell Brax about Aaron even though there could be dangers. I found it awful to hear that Heath hadn't even seen Kyle in nearly 6 months how exactly is that meant to make Kyle feel. Kyle seeing Casey and nearly crying was so sad, he did practically raise him through the baby years and he will nearly be a teenager when when Kyle gets out. Poor Josh, Alexei sounds horrible, he is just awful, he's very creepy as well it make shivers go down my back Josh needs to get out of there as soon as possible. I really hope that Kyle will be able to get the money from Brax so that he will be able to help Josh before things go from bad to worse, I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon. xx Thanks Suzza! I'm so glad you liked it! I always felt like Brax, and especially Heath, just sort of tossed Kyle aside when they didn't need him to do their dirty work. When Brax came back that time to see Ricky, he wasn't even going to bother saying hello to Kyle. He seemed a little surprised (and amused) that Kyle got so emotional about him still being alive. Heath is back in town now and he's made no mention of Kyle whatsoever. I just feel like he's been chasing them around like a lost puppy for years and they don't really care about him that much. Sure, they wouldn't turn their backs on him, but like he said, 'out of sight, out of mind'. And yeah, Alexei is unbelievably creepy and just a little bit bonkers! Can you imagine being locked in a tiny room with him!? (shudder!) 6 hours ago, Kristen said: Loved Aaron and Kyle sleeping together Thanks Kristen Thought I'd explain the sleeping arrangements a little better. I doubt a prison bunk bed would make for a very comfortable night's sleep. Kind of nice to think of them snuggled up there together like a couple of little lovebirds Sharp contrast to Josh's sleeping arrangements! 3 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Pity that Kyle can't tell his family about Aaron, but very in character.Josh is still having a hard time with Alexei, I wonder what Plan B is... I don't think Kyle would be comfortable sharing that aspect of his life with Brax, and I'm not sure that Brax would be that accepting either (Unless there's something Brax isn't telling us, and that's why Ash is so loyal to him and his family? Bit more to that relationship than meets the eye maybe? Haha!) You'll have to wait and see what plan B is in the next chapter Thanks for reading everyone! x 1 Quote
Suzza101 Posted December 13, 2016 Author Report Posted December 13, 2016 37 minutes ago, Ludub said: I just feel like he's been chasing them around like a lost puppy for years Yea he did chase then like a lost puppy he did so many things for them just to please them. 1 Quote
KittCatt Posted December 13, 2016 Report Posted December 13, 2016 Great chapter! Continue to love Kyle and Aaron. Aaron is just really supportive and loving, and it really complements Kyle's generosity well. The contrast between Kyle and Aaron's family is apparent, but I'm glad Aaron is going home to a family that loves him and misses him. Kyle's family just seem to push him aside...Felt really sorry for Kyle in that scene with Brax, especially when he was thinking about little Casey. Alexei just gets worse, even when he sort of backs off...Somehow he is able to be threatening, creepy and scary when he's 'taking things slow'. It was good that Josh lied, but I don't think Alexei will hold off for long. Hope this plan works! Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted December 13, 2016 Report Posted December 13, 2016 12 minutes ago, KittCatt said: Continue to love Kyle and Aaron. Aaron is just really supportive and loving, and it really complements Kyle's generosity well. The contrast between Kyle and Aaron's family is apparent, but I'm glad Aaron is going home to a family that loves him and misses him. Kyle's family just seem to push him aside...Felt really sorry for Kyle in that scene with Brax, especially when he was thinking about little Casey. Alexei just gets worse, even when he sort of backs off...Somehow he is able to be threatening, creepy and scary when he's 'taking things slow'. It was good that Josh lied, but I don't think Alexei will hold off for long. Hope this plan works! Thanks KittCatt! Really glad you enjoyed it! I think Aaron and Kyle would genuinely make a great couple because they have quite different personality traits, but as you say, they complement each other. Kyle has never really had anyone in his life that truly cares about him, and I think he knows that he's found that in Aaron. It's just hard for him to accept real love, especially when he has a family like his. I actually just started thinking about Kyle in the show and how he's going to spend ten years in prison. He won't see Casey until he's nearly a teenager, and considering what a big part he played in his early life, that's just incredibly sad I wanted to explore that. And yes, Alexei can be incredibly threatening, even when he's being 'nice'. I was shuddering at the thought of what Josh is going through (even as I wrote it, lol!) Imagine having to lie there like that?! The poor guy! I might actually have another chapter ready shortly (either tonight or tomorrow night... we'll see.) I'm on a bit of a roll with this one, and I want to write it while I have the inspiration, and the momentum behind me! x 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted December 13, 2016 Report Posted December 13, 2016 Great chapters Gonna love how Kyle acted like a big brother towards Josh and got himself beaten up Liking Aaron and Kyle together Felt sorry for Josh 1 Quote
pembie Posted December 14, 2016 Report Posted December 14, 2016 I'm slightly worried for Aaron's safety seeing as you have given him a supportive and happy family completely opposite to Kyle.. Kyle should tell Brax his gay I think Brax's reaction would be to turn near enough into the hulk and punch a huge hole into the side of the prison Allowing Josh, Kyle and Aaron to run for the hills Naa I look forward to seeing if Brax will help out 2 Quote
Ludub Posted December 14, 2016 Report Posted December 14, 2016 Just now, pembie said: Kyle should tell Brax his gay I think Brax's reaction would be to turn near enough into the hulk and punch a huge hole into the side of the prison Allowing Josh, Kyle and Aaron to run for the hills Hahaha! That's certainly an interesting escape plan! I have an image of Brax painted green now... in tiny ripped jean shorts... 1 Quote
pembie Posted December 14, 2016 Report Posted December 14, 2016 Oh my Josh is really suffering in this story Quote
Ludub Posted December 14, 2016 Report Posted December 14, 2016 Just now, pembie said: Oh my Josh is really suffering in this story Can you tell how much I love him? Quote
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