Caged (by Ludub) - comments

[Ludub]

51 minutes ago, christine king said:

Ricky is mad at Brax but her doing the exchange is probably better than Brax doing it himself.

Yes, I actually think this was the right decision and the only smart thing to do if they're gonna go ahead with it. Plus, Ricky probably wouldn't mind a few months away from Casey if she did get caught!  She's been trying to hand him to other people from the moment he was born, lol! Thanks for reading x

[KittCatt]

Great chapter!

Josh is certainly brave doing that! But I'm glad it stopped Alexei from doing more damage. The way Alexei continues to talk about himself in third person, even while in a huge amount of pain is something else though  Hope Josh isn't found out, or he might be in even more trouble than before. I also liked the mention of Josh's survival instinct kicking in.

The first scene with Kyle, Aaron and Josh was heartbreaking. You could see that Josh was broken. But then he woke up to his surroundings and knew what he wanted to do. Love how supportive both Kyle and Aaron were.

And poor Kyle and Aaron are going to be broken in a few days  Nice to get more insight into their relationship and how their romance (if you can call it that?) started.

Looking forward to more!  

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh gosh.Josh was pretty much catatonic at the start but managed to follow through on Kyle's plan.For one worrying moment when he mentioned pills, I thought he was planning suicide but turns out Alexei's the one on the receiving end.Well, he pretty much deserves it.

[Inactive User]

Great chapters

Aww poor Kyle! Looks like Aaron is getting out soon

Hoping Ricky doesn't get caught by managing to get the money to the prison but glad she's going to help Josh anyway

Hoping Josh doesn't get caught out for what he did 

Well like RR1 said above, Alexei did deserve it

Update soon please xx

[christine king]

Great Chapter.

So sad that Kyle and Aaron will be torn apart in a matter of days.

Josh used Kyle's plan to stop Alexei from doing more damage but lets hope Josh doesn't get caught.

Update soon please xx

[pembie]

Oh Lu Oooooooh SNAP ouch the side effects of taking too much viagra...Never given it much thought but sounds like a nightmare Ewwww plusing veins and your todder turning purple... I have never winced while reading before but it happened tonight.. Graphic very graphic but I still enjoyed it in a strange way   

Edited December 20, 2016 by pembie

[Guest]

Great chapter

liked Kyle and Aaron being friendly towards Josh.

Wonder what Josh did to Alexei

Update again soon

Edited December 20, 2016 by Kristen

[Suzza101]

Great chapter. Sad that Kyle and Aaron will be torn apart soon but hopefully that will mean that Josh can stay in Kyle's cell. I liked them being friendly towards Josh. I'm curious to see what Josh did to Alexei, can't wait to read more please update soon. 

[Ludub]

5 hours ago, pembie said:

Oh Lu Oooooooh SNAP ouch the side effects of taking too much viagra...Never given it much thought but sounds like a nightmare Ewwww plusing veins and your todder turning purple... I have never winced while reading before but it happened tonight.. Graphic very graphic but I still enjoyed it in a strange way   

Haha! I did say that my search history was very strange!  The dangers are very real, and 6 pills would be an overdose even for an elephant! There are some very disturbing news stories of men taking massive doses to impress their partners, all with pretty disastrous results... I did wonder how you men would feel reading this chapter though. I kind of imagined a collective crossing of legs  (sorry guys!) Hope I didn't gross you out too much! I promise, in my next story I'll leave people's todgers out of it! Lol!

7 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

turns out Alexei's the one on the receiving end.Well, he pretty much deserves it.

7 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Well like RR1 said above, Alexei did deserve it

That he did!  I have absolutely no sympathy for Cuddles or his swollen member. Just desserts really, isn't it?!

8 hours ago, KittCatt said:

Josh is certainly brave doing that!

Yeah, I think this was a massive risk to take and an incredibly brave one. It could have backfired spectacularly and he could have been there hours later 'thanking him'  God, Alexei's creepy (and yes, I do know he came from my mind!  That's what scares me...)

8 hours ago, KittCatt said:

The first scene with Kyle, Aaron and Josh was heartbreaking. You could see that Josh was broken. But then he woke up to his surroundings and knew what he wanted to do. Love how supportive both Kyle and Aaron were.

7 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Oh gosh.Josh was pretty much catatonic at the start but managed to follow through on Kyle's plan.For one worrying moment when he mentioned pills, I thought he was planning suicide

Yeah, I think Josh just went somewhere else in his mind for a while to get through it. He disassociated in order to get through the trauma and it just took a while to come round again. Like being in severe shock. Very sad.

5 hours ago, Suzza101 said:

Sad that Kyle and Aaron will be torn apart soon but hopefully that will mean that Josh can stay in Kyle's cell

7 hours ago, christine king said:

So sad that Kyle and Aaron will be torn apart in a matter of days.

8 hours ago, KittCatt said:

And poor Kyle and Aaron are going to be broken in a few days

Yeah, it's been coming but I don't think Kyle is really prepared for this loss. Aaron has been his coping mechanism in this cruel environment and losing that companionship will be heart wrenching  sad times.

6 hours ago, Kristen said:

liked Kyle and Aaron being friendly towards Josh.

9 hours ago, KittCatt said:

Love how supportive both Kyle and Aaron were.

I think Aaron was shocked at how bad Josh obviously was. He didn't see him in the infirmary that time so he only had Kyle's description of things, and it's gotten a lot worse since then. Seeing someone so beaten down, it would be hard not to feel sorry for them, especially when you know how much they matter to your significant other. I also think that Aaron's just a kind person so it comes naturally to him 

Thanks to everyone for the kind comments! And glad you're enjoying it! x

[Red Ranger 1]

Josh really is a glass half-empty kind of guy...But then I guess he has been through a lot lately.Looks like Alexei's well and truly out of the picture.Looking forward to more!