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Alf's 75th Birthday


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Story Title: Alf 75th Birthday 
Type of story: Medium Fic 
Main Characters: Alf, Leah, Vinnie, Sally, Flynn, Vj,Jack, Martha, Brax, Ricky, Shannon, Shane, Cassie and Ric 
BTTB rating: see official ratings guidance right here
Genre: Romance, Drama, 
Does story include spoilers:  No
Any warnings: Sexual content, violence/death
Summary: 5 lines max - It Alf 75th Birthday so people return to the bay to celebrate it and reunite with each other  

Chapter 1

Leah Pov 

I have listed people who Alf loves and are coming back for his birthday. He knows about the party but not who is coming. The guest list is as follows

Hayley Lawson 

Noah Lawson 

Sally Fletcher 

Flynn Saunders 

Ric Dadly

Cassie Turner

Darryl Braxton 

Ricky Sharpe

Heath Braxton 

Shannon Reid

Shane Parish

April Scott

Casey Braxton

Phoebe Nicoleson 

Indi Walker 

Romeo Smith 

Pippa Ross

Don Fisher

Curtis Reed

Jack Wilson

Martha Mackenzie 

Jack Holden

Nate Cooper 

Kyle Braxton 

Hannah Wilson

Evie Mcguire 

Matt Page

Josh Barrett

Maddy Osbornse

Sid Walker

Will Smith 

Dani Sutherland 

And that all i know so far... there are still more guests to confirm 

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19 minutes ago, sallyandflynnfan said:

Story Title: Alf 75th Birthday 
Type of story: Medium Fic 
Main Characters: Alf, Leah, Vinnie, Sally, Flynn, Vj,Jack, Martha, Brax, Ricky, Shannon, Shane, Cassie and Ric 
BTTB rating: see official ratings guidance right here
Genre: Romance, Drama, 
Does story include spoilers:  No
Any warnings: Sexual content, violence/death
Summary: 5 lines max - It Alf 75th Birthday so people return to the bay to celebrate it and reunite with each other  

Chapter 1

Leah Pov 

I have listed people who Alf loves and are coming back for his birthday. He knows about the party but not who is coming. The guest list is as follows

Hayley Lawson 

Noah Lawson 

Sally Fletcher 

Flynn Saunders 

Ric Dadly

Cassie Turner

Darryl Braxton 

Ricky Sharpe

Heath Braxton 

Shannon Reid

Shane Parish

April Scott

Casey Braxton

Phoebe Nicoleson 

Indi Walker 

Romeo Smith 

Pippa Ross

Don Fisher

Curtis Reed

Jack Wilson

Martha Mackenzie 

Jack Holden

Nate Cooper 

Kyle Braxton 

Hannah Wilson

Evie Mcguire 

Matt Page

Josh Barrett

Maddy Osbornse

Sid Walker

Will Smith 

Dani Sutherland 

And that all i know so far... there are still more guests to confirm 

Is that like a prologue which usually happens before chapter 1 where you get an idea of what's going on? 

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Chapter 2

[Phoebe walks in to Salt and Brody there talking to Ziggy]

Phoebe: I see this place haven't changed one bit Brods

[Brody turns around and runs up and hugs Phoebe]

Brody: You should told me you were coming

Phoebe: I wanted to surprise you

Brody: Well you did, come to the bar and i will shout you Pizza

Phoebe: Ok sounds good

[Phoebe and Brody walks over to Ziggy]

Brody: Ziggy this is my best friend Phoebe

Ziggy: Hi Phoebe I heard alot about you from this guy

Phoebe All good I hope

Ziggy: Yeah

Phoebe: Well Brods is shouting me Pizza while he works how about you join me and we get to know each other

Ziggy: Sure, that sounds great 

[Brody walks out and Phoebe and Ziggy sit and talk]

Phoebe: So how long have you been in the bay?

Ziggy: About 6 months and everyone here loves you

Phoebe; I am sure they love you to everyone here is like family

Ziggy: Yeah that my favourite part of the bay

Phoebe: Yeah it mine to

 

[Elsewhere Shannon looks out to the ocean and Shane walks towards her with his bags]

Shane: Hey Shannon

Shannon: Oh hey, can I have a hug 

Shane: Sure

[Shane and Shannon hug]

Shannon: It been a while

Shane: A bit to long

Shannon: Yeah, How Angel is she here

Shane: Nah we not together anymore we broke up a year ago after she cheated on me

Shannon: Im Sorry

Shane: Don't be, Let go to the Caravan park and get some vans

Shannon: Yeah sure, I have so many memories there both good and bad

Shane: So do I, What yours?

Shannon: Well hanging out with you and Sally and Selina were the goods one and then that also the place where i almost ruined your life

Shane: You didnt 

[They arrive and walk in and see Alf with a female]

Alf: Stone the flamin crows, Shane and Shannon your a sight for sore eyes

[ They have a group hug with the female looking on]

Shannon: Hi I'm Shannon and this is Shane

Leah: Hi Im Leah

Shane: Hi Leah it nice to meet you

Shannon: Your Vinnie wife arent you like you were married to him

Leah: You know him

Shannon: Yeah he was best friends with Lachie who was my boyfriend who died of a brain tumor

Leah: Im sorry

Shannon: Dont be 

[ A surprise guests walks in the door]

Alf: Vinnie we were just talking about you, I thought you dying in a farming accident

Vinnie: Yeah I got the cops to lie I wanted Leah to be able to move on

Leah: Even when i did i still loved you and i still love you

Vinnie: I love you to

[Leah and Vinnie Kiss as VJ  and Hunter walks in]

VJ; Yuk mum i dont wanna see that

Leah: Vj this is Vinnie your dad he alive

[ They shake hands and man hugs]

Vj: And this is Hunter he like a brother to me

Vinnie: Hi Hunter

Hunter: Hey it nice to meet you

Vinnie: You too mate. Can I have a Van Alf?

Shane: Can i have one as well

Shannon: me too please

Alf: Vinnie you can have number 3 and Shane and Shannon are you right to crush together in van number 5 it has bunks bed

Shane and Shannon: Yeah that fine

[Shane, Shannon and Vinnie walks to there vans]

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Great start

liked how you blended together  old and new characters.

Update again soon :)

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