sallyandflynnfan Posted August 11, 2017 Author Report Posted August 11, 2017 21 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Liked the start to this fanfiction. Looking forwards to where you are taking this Thanks 19 hours ago, KKB said: Love this Thanks 18 hours ago, Kristen said: Great start liked how you blended together old and new characters. Update again soon I will and that was the aim 7 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Awesome chapter Liked the blending of old and new characters Update soon please xx Glad you like that. That the aim
sallyandflynnfan Posted August 11, 2017 Author Report Posted August 11, 2017 Chapter 3 [Sally and Flynn are at the beach as they just arrived back from LA] Sally: This place haven't changed a bit Flynn: Yeah well that Summer bay for you Sally: True that where we met and fell in love Flynn: Well it the best place to meet anyone Sally: True [Sally sees two familer faces walking towards her] Brax: Sally it been a while haven't it. How Pippa doing? [Sally hugs Brax] Sally: She so much better thanks for everything Brax and you as well Ricky Ricky: I just glad she ok [Flynn watches on] Brax: We both are Sally: Oh Brax and Ricky this is Flynn my husband Flynn: Brax, Ricky hi it nice to meet you, it seems like you know Pippa my daughter Ricky: Yeah we do she and Darcy Brax Brother daughter were pretty close Flynn: Right Sally: Well I going to the Summer Bay house to see Alf and Leah and whoever else is already back. Do you want to come? Brax: Yeah for sure let's go [Sally, Flynn, Brax and Ricky walk to the Summer bay house and go inside and see Shannon and Alf] Shannon: Sal long time no see Sally: Yeah it has been [Sally and Shannon hug] Shannon: Shane and Vinnie back too Sally: Hold on I thought Vinnie Shannon: it a long story Flynn: Sally who this Shannon: Im Shannon and Sal like a sister to me so don't hurt her Flynn: Hi Shannon Im Flynn and I wont hurt her Alf: Brax hey Brax: Hey mate [They man hug as Leah, Vinnie, Shane, Hunter and Vj walk in] Leah: Ricky, Hey Omg Sally hello [ Leah gives me both a hug and Vinnie hugs Sally] Vinnie: We need to catch up later Sal Sally: Yeah we really do [Phoebe and Brody walks in and Phoebe sees Ricky and hugs her] Phoebe: Ricky I missed you Ricky: I missed you to Brax: What about me Phoebe: And you as well Brax Brody: As in Brax who owned Angelos Brax Brax: Yeah that me Brody: Im Brody I own Angelos well Salt now Brax: Well I come check it out tonight Brody: How about all of you come for dinner tonight it on the house that way we can all catch up or get to know each other Shane: Sounds good Alf: Invite Ziggy to after all she like your second best friend after Phoebe Brody: Yeah I will call her Sally: See you all tonight [They all go there different ways to get ready for Salt that evening]
Guest Posted August 11, 2017 Report Posted August 11, 2017 great chapter liked how the characters old and new interacted. Update again soon
sallyandflynnfan Posted August 11, 2017 Author Report Posted August 11, 2017 2 hours ago, Kristen said: great chapter liked how the characters old and new interacted. Update again soon Thanks and will do
Inactive User Posted August 11, 2017 Report Posted August 11, 2017 Great chapter Liked the interaction between the old and new characters Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx
sallyandflynnfan Posted August 12, 2017 Author Report Posted August 12, 2017 1 hour ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Great chapter Liked the interaction between the old and new characters Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Thanks
christine king Posted August 12, 2017 Report Posted August 12, 2017 Great story. Just catching up. Great to see new and old characters connect.
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 13, 2017 Report Posted August 13, 2017 Interesting story with an eclectic mix of characters.Shocked that you did the unthinkable and had Shane there broken up from Angel (freeing him up for Shannon perhaps?).Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
sallyandflynnfan Posted August 13, 2017 Author Report Posted August 13, 2017 1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Interesting story with an eclectic mix of characters.Shocked that you did the unthinkable and had Shane there broken up from Angel (freeing him up for Shannon perhaps?).Looking forward to seeing where you take this! You might be right about what your thinking about Shane and Shannon 15 hours ago, christine king said: Great story. Just catching up. Great to see new and old characters connect. Thanks glad your liking it
sallyandflynnfan Posted August 13, 2017 Author Report Posted August 13, 2017 Chapter 4 (At Salt that night eating dinner when a person walk in) Sally: Lance Lance: Hey Sal (They hug) Alf: Lance this is Brax, Ricky, Phoebe, Brody and Ziggy Phoebe and Brody: Hey Lance Ziggy: You got a cool name Lance: Thanks Brax: Come join us Ricky: We have lots of food Flynn: Come on mate join us (Lance and Sally sits down and they eat when a older man walks in) Alf: Don good to see you come and join us Don: I will when the other two guests come in they are just parking the car Sally: Well who are they Don: Two people you and Flynn well be happy to see (Two People walk in) Flynn: Well who Ric: Hey dad (Flynn and Ric man hug then he hugs Cassie) Cassie: Hey Mr Stewart hey Sal Brax: Come join us Ric: We didn't bring money Brody: it fine it on me Cassie: You sure Phoebe: He sure (They all sit and eat and talk)
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