Inactive User Posted August 5, 2017 Report Posted August 5, 2017 Great chapter I liked how you brought the Stewart sisters into this fanfiction Aw so sad that Alf died Liked how you brought Rabbit back into this fanfiction. I loved that storyline on the show back in 2010. Looking forwards to the next chapter Quote
Ludub Posted August 5, 2017 Author Report Posted August 5, 2017 (edited) Oh my goodness! That was an unexpected vision of the afterlife! Loved it! Nice that his siblings were able to make it back just in the nick of time (and Don Fisher). Gotta love Morag and Celia! Loved all the flashbacks to Geoff and Melody and how they got together - like I said before, those two were made for each other. Really glad Evie and Matt are going to make a go of things but I have to say I was surprised that Spencer was one of the ones orchestrating their reunion. I didn't think he'd really got his anger out of his system even after shouting at her, so hooking her up with Matt is a big step for him. Sweet that Josh was in on it too. That would be hard for him, even now, I think. Lots of really nice interactions here. Really well written as always! Edited August 5, 2017 by Ludub Quote
pembie Posted August 5, 2017 Report Posted August 5, 2017 Sad that Alf has died but at least he has one of my favorites to welcome him through the pearly gates Seems his got a few more people to meet first before he goes to do a spot of fishing sitting on a cloud.. Question has the She Hulk movie been out yet? If it has I have missed it Nice little scene with Matt and Evie and all the Geoff and Melody scenes were great too. Worthy late night reading 1 Quote
Guest Posted August 6, 2017 Report Posted August 6, 2017 Great chapter So sad that Alf died. Liked that you brought the Stewart sisters back. Update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 6, 2017 Report Posted August 6, 2017 (edited) On 05/08/2017 at 22:44, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: I liked how you brought the Stewart sisters into this fanfiction On 05/08/2017 at 23:27, Ludub said: Nice that his siblings were able to make it back just in the nick of time (and Don Fisher). Gotta love Morag and Celia! On 06/08/2017 at 02:47, Kristen said: Liked that you brought the Stewart sisters back. Thanks! I think that one kind of snowballed. I thought that Morag and Celia would probably come back, and if they're there then why not add in the much-neglected Barbara, and then maybe Don Fisher would come as well...So in the end, they all turned up together, which is kind of fitting in a way. On 05/08/2017 at 22:44, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Liked how you brought Rabbit back into this fanfiction. I loved that storyline on the show back in 2010. On 05/08/2017 at 23:27, Ludub said: Oh my goodness! That was an unexpected vision of the afterlife! Loved it! On 05/08/2017 at 23:35, pembie said: Sad that Alf has died but at least he has one of my favorites to welcome him through the pearly gates Seems his got a few more people to meet first before he goes to do a spot of fishing sitting on a cloud.. I was staggered since I had that idea in my head from a very early stage because I needed to put a positive spin on Alf dying...and then I completely forgot to write the scene and ended the chapter with Morag announcing Alf had died.Then quite a while later I suddenly thought "Oh my god, I forgot about Rabbit!" so I re-wrote the end of the previous scene and added that bit on.I really wanted to have her as a little girl but reality ensued and I realised she'd have to be older.But I still gave her the same cheeky Rabbit attitude. On 05/08/2017 at 23:27, Ludub said: Loved all the flashbacks to Geoff and Melody and how they got together - like I said before, those two were made for each other. Really glad Evie and Matt are going to make a go of things but I have to say I was surprised that Spencer was one of the ones orchestrating their reunion. I didn't think he'd really got his anger out of his system even after shouting at her, so hooking her up with Matt is a big step for him. Sweet that Josh was in on it too. That would be hard for him, even now, I think. On 05/08/2017 at 23:35, pembie said: Nice little scene with Matt and Evie and all the Geoff and Melody scenes were great too. I am surprised at how much Geoff and Melody scenes I included, that chapter ended up being very heavily about them.But I guess when you've had the idea in your head for seven and a half years, you want to get a lot of it out and their relationship did need the opportunity to build slowly.As I think I mentioned, at an early stage Evelyn and Matt's break-up was meant to be it and at one point she was meant to still be with Spencer, but then I was watching them in the show and I thought "Aww, they work so well together, I can't really break them up for good", and it gave me something else happening in the present day.I possibly could have done with a scene of Josh and Spencer being persuaded to help out but that would have spoiled the surprise.I think after Skye turned out to be pregnant, it mollified Spencer a bit and he's able to be at least grudgingly happy for them while probably wondering what exactly Evie sees in him... On 05/08/2017 at 23:35, pembie said: Question has the She Hulk movie been out yet? If it has I have missed it No, that was just me being a bit silly! I figured it's ten years in the future, and given that Marvel is making movies about superheroes so obscure even I haven't heard of them (seriously, Guardians of the Galaxy?), I wanted to show them really trying to push all the D-listers on the big screen.But if I chose someone like Ka-Zar or Sub-Mariner then everyone would go "Who's that?", so She-Hulk kind of stood out! Edited September 26, 2017 by Red Ranger 1 2 Quote
JosieTash Posted August 7, 2017 Report Posted August 7, 2017 Liked the way that Melody and Geoff getting together after soooo long dovetailed nicely into Evie and Matt doing same thing. REALLY liked this ….. “It was a bit of a rough ride,” Melody agreed,“But I guess if something’s meant to be…” Ruby looked at her girlfriend with a slight smile.“No matter how unlikely it might seem.” “Like Bible Boy producing two kids,”Aden added, having come up behind them. Melody shot him a log-suffering look.“It’s nice to see you haven’t changed, Aden.” “Just as lovable as ever.” I thought you would [somehow] hit the re-set button ……I’ve watched too much Star Trek ….. about Alf and somehow have him escape death [miracle cure etc] but having him be greeted by RABBIT on the others side was BEYOND INSPIRED !!!!! I’m guessing since all those ppl came back to the bay to see Alf, Spoiler that he’ll now encounter the likes of Ailsa etc Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 7, 2017 Report Posted August 7, 2017 6 hours ago, JosieTash said: Liked the way that Melody and Geoff getting together after soooo long dovetailed nicely into Evie and Matt doing same thing. REALLY liked this ….. “It was a bit of a rough ride,” Melody agreed,“But I guess if something’s meant to be…” Ruby looked at her girlfriend with a slight smile.“No matter how unlikely it might seem.” “Like Bible Boy producing two kids,”Aden added, having come up behind them. Melody shot him a log-suffering look.“It’s nice to see you haven’t changed, Aden.” “Just as lovable as ever.” When the plot gives you a coupon, use it! It was a nice way of inspiring the next generation's matchmaking.And yeah, I had to give the remaining 2008 vintage characters some interaction and give Aden one last chance to have a dig at Geoff! 6 hours ago, JosieTash said: I thought you would [somehow] hit the re-set button ……I’ve watched too much Star Trek ….. about Alf and somehow have him escape death [miracle cure etc] but having him be greeted by RABBIT on the others side was BEYOND INSPIRED !!!!! I’m guessing since all those ppl came back to the bay to see Alf, Reveal hidden contents that he’ll now encounter the likes of Ailsa etc Thought you might like Rabbit's appearance! I'd assume something like that awaits Alf but that's the last we see of him, I'm afraid. Hopefully I'll get the last chapter up tonight! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted August 7, 2017 Author Report Posted August 7, 2017 My goodness! So much positivity in this chapter... just makes you feel warm and fuzzy, doesn't it?! You know the section I'm gonna go to first (predictable as always!) I loved the Josh and Phoebe scene, and I'm so glad that things are going so well for him (now that Alf has pulled some serious strings for him!) and that he's going to visit Andy (finally!). Made me a bit emotional really. Lovely to hear about all the happy couples that didn't make it to the Bay to say goodbye, particularly that Nick and Jade are together (yay!). Annie and Jai is nice too. Even if she was one character that couldn't help but get on my nerves, I'm glad that future Annie is happy! So? That's the end then? I'm kind of sad about that. I wanted to continue on this trail, finding out what happened to everyone and how they all got together / back together. I've really enjoyed this! Thanks so much for sharing Red! x Quote
pembie Posted August 7, 2017 Report Posted August 7, 2017 (edited) Alf was family to everyone really wasn't he? Always there to kick them into touch and always there when people didn't know what to do or who to turn always there with words of wisdom Very nice thing he did for Josh there. Very nice character driven story even if I did lose the plot of everyone sometimes. I say this everytime but any other stories planned? Edited August 7, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Guest Posted August 7, 2017 Report Posted August 7, 2017 Great chapter Lovely funeral for Alf. Liked that you mentioned Nick and Jade and Jai and Annie. was that really the end? Quote
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