sallyandflynnfan Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Story Title: New Beginning New love Type of story: Short/Medium Fic Main Characters: Coco, Michelle (my character), Raffy, Ryder, Bob (My character) . BTTB rating: PG genre General. Does story include spoilers: No. Any warnings: Sexual content Summary: When Coco friend Michelle comes to the bay to be away from her family. Coco is really happy to see her and hang out again. When Raffy feels left out what does she do? Will Michelle fall for Ryder friend Bob? Chapter one (Michelle walks in the diner and looks around when Coco spots her and leaves Raffy and Ryder at a table and run up to her) Coco: Mich it really you Michelle: Yeah it time for a change (Coco and Michelle hug and then pull away) Michelle: Do you know anywhere i can stay Coco: You can stay at ours Michelle: Really Coco: Yeah i missed you plus things with dad probs world war 3 Michelle: I missed you more. Do you go to Summer Bay High Coco: Yeah and my mum the principal Michelle: Wow i better be good then Coco: Yeah Michelle: Do you wanna show me around the good places Coco: Oh you mean to the beach Michelle: Yeah Coco: Of course (Raffy and Ryder walk over) Coco : Raffy and Ryder this is my best friend Michelle. Michelle this is Raffy and Ryder Ryder: Michelle hi Michelle: Hi Raffy: Hi Michelle Coco: Wanna come to the beach with Michelle and I Raffy: Of course Ryder: Yeah (They all walk out of the diner)
Guest Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Great start Raffy might get jealous of Michelle but we shall see. Update again soon
KKB Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Great start to this fanfiction. Cant wait for more. Update asap.
Inactive User Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Awesome start to this fanfiction Update soon please xx
sallyandflynnfan Posted January 8, 2018 Author Report Posted January 8, 2018 Chapter 2 [Coco and Michelle are smiling and laughing as Ryder and Raffy come out of the water] Michelle: So are those two a couple Coco: No Michelle: Are you and him Coco: Yeah we are Michelle: Well you got a good one [Ryder and Raffy walk up to them] Raffy: A good what Coco: Boyfriend Ryder: Of course you do [Coco and Ryder kiss] Michelle: Do we have an icecream place Ryder: I show you it Michelle: Awesome lead the way [Michelle and Ryder stand up and walk towards surf club] Raffy: How long have you known each other Coco: Since High school Raffy: I am going to get replaced Coco: No i sure you guys will be friends Raffy: I'm Not Coco: You will dont make me choose Raffy: I wont [Ryder gets Coco an icecream and Michelle buys a chocolate one also] Michelle: Dont hurt her or else you have me to deal with Ryder dont worry i wont hurt her [A guy walks in the surf Club as does Coco and Raffy who join Ryder and Michelle] Coco: Thanks for the icecream Ryder: Anytime [ A guy comes towards them] Bob: Hey Coco, Hey Ryder Ryder: Hey Bob Bob: I dont believe i seem you around Michelle: I just moved here and know Coco from way back Bob: Well im Bob Michelle: I'm Michelle [They smile at each other]
KKB Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Looks like potenial romance for Bob and Michelle. Raffy is sure jealouse (Bob and Jillian TBL spelling). Update again soon
sallyandflynnfan Posted January 8, 2018 Author Report Posted January 8, 2018 25 minutes ago, KKB said: Looks like potenial romance for Bob and Michelle. Raffy is sure jealouse (Bob and Jillian TBL spelling). Update again soon Thanks and will do
Guest Posted January 8, 2018 Report Posted January 8, 2018 Great chapter hmm Michelle and Bob maybe a romantic option arising. Update again soon
sallyandflynnfan Posted January 8, 2018 Author Report Posted January 8, 2018 31 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter hmm Michelle and Bob maybe a romantic option arising. Update again soon Thanks and Yeah maybe what would you think of them together from what i written so far
sallyandflynnfan Posted January 9, 2018 Author Report Posted January 9, 2018 Chapter 3 (Coco and Michelle walk in to the Astoni where Brody, Ziggy and Ben are) Coco: Dad, Zig, Brods where are you guys Ziggy: Coco we in the lounge room (Coco and Michelle walk in) Coco: I hope you don't mind we have a houseguest (The three look up from their phones and Ziggy goes and gives Michelle a hug) Michelle : It is good to see you Ziggy: Yeah you to Ben: You can buck with Coco if you like Michelle: Thanks Ben: Stuff at home not good i guessing Michelle: No not really (Brody looks at Ziggy) Ziggy: Michelle this Brody my boyfriend and Brody this Michelle a friend of Coco (Brody and Michelle shake hands) Coco: Brods what are you making for dinner tonight Michelle: Surely you don't let the guest cook Brody: Im actual a chef so i don't mind and I live with these guys Michelle: Right ok i didn't know Brody: It all good Brody: By the way we are having Pizza if you wanna give me a hand Michelle Michelle: Sure (Brody and Michelle walk in to the kitchen) Michelle: Just so you hear this first hand my dad he drinks and hurts me he also hits me so that why i come here Brody: Right I"m so sorry Michelle: It not your fault (They make pizzas and put them in Pizza Oven) (Ben,Coco and Ziggy are in the lounge room when Leah comes in ) Leah: Im sorry to come this late but there been an accident Ben: What sort of accident Leah: It Alf he was in a car crush Ziggy: Omg how is he Leah: Stable for now Coco: How Ryder Leah: A mess i was hoping you could come (Leah cries and Ben goes and hugs her) Coco: Of course i can come Ziggy: I come with you Hunter might need someone Leah : Thanks guys (Brody walks in with Michelle) Brody: Ziggy what wrong Ziggy: It Alf he been in an accident Brody: Is he ok Coco: He stable Brody : And how Ryder, Hunter and Martha Leah: They are a mess Jack with Martha gosh i glad he out of witness protection and Martha turned Hugo in and stayed in the bay because she have Jack now if she went on the run they wouldn't be together Brody: Michelle this is Leah Leah: Oh hi Michelle I'm Leah Patterson Michelle: Im Michelle Smith Coco: Are you fine coming to the hospital Ryder needs me and Alf his grandad so he would be a mess Michelle: Yeah that fine lets go
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