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Great chapter, you gave really good detail in what has happened in Cyprus in the last few years for VJ and Luc, though I'll be honest I didn't expect a kiss between the two this quick, but it's good to see that they're going to take this slow. I look forward to more. ?

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20 hours ago, D.B said:

 I'll be honest I didn't expect a kiss between the two this quick, but it's good to see that they're going to take this slow

Well, I had a time skip to cover that one!

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1 hour ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

Well, I had a time skip to cover that one!

Of course, yeah, you skipped ahead a couple of months in the story, I just meant that I didn't expect to happen so soon chapter-wise. Sorry I should have been more specific. 

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Great ending

well it didn't except Liv and VJ to get together so soon but at least they thought of Luc.

Thanks for sharing  :)

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On ‎17‎/‎09‎/‎2018 at 00:51, Kristen said:

well it didn't except Liv and VJ to get together so soon but at least they thought of Luc.

Like I said, originally it was just going to be a one-shot showing them meeting up, but I decided to extend it a bit and show them actually getting together.

 

On ‎17‎/‎09‎/‎2018 at 01:56, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Liked the ending to this fanfiction

Glad you liked it!

 

On ‎18‎/‎09‎/‎2018 at 15:16, pembie said:

Getting together after just one date Normally takes me a whole year to get the girl haha

He could have got her even earlier if he really wanted!

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5 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said:

 

 

 

He could have got her even earlier if he really wanted!

OK now that's just showing off hah

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A really nice ending, Red, it's nice to see VJ and Olivia staying together and planning ahead for Luc's sake. Thanks for sharing this! ?

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44 minutes ago, D.B said:

A really nice ending, Red, it's nice to see VJ and Olivia staying together and planning ahead for Luc's sake. Thanks for sharing this! ?

Thanks! One of those pairings I wished happened...

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