Red Ranger 1 Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 Ah, I wondered if you'd go there.Wonder what sort of reaction Brody will get.Hopefully not Phoebe instantly dying from the shock. 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Liked the interaction between Brody and Phoebe And loved the twist that Brody's in love with Phoebe Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted October 10, 2017 Author Report Posted October 10, 2017 (edited) Around of applause for Brody there making a right twathead of himself just before he dies as well. What a couple of awkward hours of life that would be lying on top of the girl who rejected you and in one of the cruelest ways of doing it too.. Got to love Pheobe's sharp tongue. Brody what a Pharthead But really what would you find to talk about if this really happened it would leave you all shook up with nowhere to go. Haha I can't help but think of that Kyle and Aaron scene of Aaron killing the sexy mood after Kyle really gave it his all in Caged You really do love your characters haha Loved the story Edited October 10, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Ooh.A bit of the author seeping through in Phoebe's assessment of Brody and their relationship? It was blunt but very Phoebe, but it is a shame that she and Brody never got the chance to move past it.You really do like being cruel to the characters you love, don't you?! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 14 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Ooh.A bit of the author seeping through in Phoebe's assessment of Brody and their relationship? Yes, that's probably fair, but I keep reading stuff here on the forum where people have Brody declaring his love for Phoebe and she's just like 'Yep, great. i'll just dump Justin then! No worries!' and I kept thinking 'That's not how it would go at all!'. Even if Phoebe had any feelings for Brody (which I don't think was ever the case) it seems very unlikely that she'd just drop Justin like a hot potato. She'd need time to come round to the idea. But yeah, the gay assessment was all me lol! 2 hours ago, pembie said: Got to love Pheobe's sharp tongue 23 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: It was blunt but very Phoebe Oh, I'm glad! Remembering her reaction to Kyle's proposal, I thought she'd be likely to lash out at him in resentment first (and she was never one to mince words!) It was just cruel of me to deny her the chance to apologise. 2 hours ago, pembie said: You really do love your characters haha 13 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: You really do like being cruel to the characters you love, don't you?! Haha! I guess I do. It is a little odd I suppose 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Really liked the ending to this fanfiction Typical Phoebe and her sharp tongue Such a shame about what happened to Brody Thanks for sharing this story with us 1 Quote
Guest Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Brody making a fool of himself right before he dies. Oh no poor Brody died why Ludub why? thanks for sharing with us Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Yes, that's probably fair, but I keep reading stuff here on the forum where people have Brody declaring his love for Phoebe and she's just like 'Yep, great. i'll just dump Justin then! No worries!' and I kept thinking 'That's not how it would go at all!'. Even if Phoebe had any feelings for Brody (which I don't think was ever the case) it seems very unlikely that she'd just drop Justin like a hot potato. She'd need time to come round to the idea. But yeah, the gay assessment was all me lol! Yeah, I know what you mean.There was a period where there was a trend on here of writing Aden and Nicole as being in a really miserable relationship, often with Belle coming back from the dead to "save" him, to the point that I ended up writing a one-shot which wasn't even about them being together and happy, it was just them pondering if maybe they'd work as a couple if the timing was right.Possibly my only protest fic! (Apart from all the others, including nearly everything I wrote last year... Possibly my only protest fic against other protest fics!) 2 Quote
bijou Posted October 11, 2017 Report Posted October 11, 2017 Aww very very Titanic at the end however I kinda guessed after Brody declared his love for Phoebe at the end of chapter 2 one of them wouldn't make it I guess I was hoping it would be Phoebe who died 1 Quote
Kellicopter Posted October 11, 2017 Report Posted October 11, 2017 Oh you killed Brody?! How could you? I absolutely loved Phoebe explaining why she thought Brody was gay on first impressions, and she isn't wrong. I'm glad that she was honest with him though, even if it was the last conversation he ever had. She'll live with that on her conscience for the rest of her pretend little life. 1 Quote
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