Inactive User Posted October 6, 2017 Report Posted October 6, 2017 Great chapter. Loved it! Loved how the SB officers are unless, haha. Liked how Beth is not afraid of Clown Brody, lol. Update soon please xx 1 Quote
JosieTash Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 The SB police station SERIOUSLY needs Georgie Watson .......she'd stop them being completely useless ...... or at least clean up the Bay all by herself !!!!!!! Agree with RR1's comments about Raffy and Coco !!!! 2 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Huh? Two Brodys? Or am I on the wrong track there (much as Beth, Phoebe and Mr B are)? And Buddy to the rescue! Quote
Ludub Posted October 10, 2017 Author Report Posted October 10, 2017 Ummmmm.... okay? So the clown has just taken Brody's name? and he and Phoebe have been strapped in a train in the sewers all these years? Or have i misunderstood? Love that Scarlett could see through Kat, and that Buddy wanted to repay Raffy for all those walks. And Phoebe whinging about how she was meant for better things! lol! Quote
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Whoa at the clown taking Brody's name Gonna love the part when Scarlett saw through Kat Typical Phoebe beginning a whiner, lol. Update soon please xx 1 Quote
Guest Posted October 10, 2017 Report Posted October 10, 2017 Great chapter Like everyone else I'm wondering if there is two Brody's? Coco as a spider is brilliant Update again soon Quote
JosieTash Posted October 12, 2017 Report Posted October 12, 2017 Phoebe and the blanket of cochroaches !!!! LOOOVED it !!!!! Raffy and Coco and Buddy and the walks thing !!!! Soooooooo cooooooool !!!!!!! 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 13, 2017 Report Posted October 13, 2017 Scenes written from Buddy's point of view? Hmm... Some nice humour in here, especially with Mason's obsessing over Beth. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted October 13, 2017 Author Report Posted October 13, 2017 I take it Buddy's barking at his own reflection?! It must be very annoying having to put up with the whims of these pesky humans. I can definitely see things from his point of view. I often think my dad's dog is looking at me with misgivings when we sit down to eat our lovely dinner and then scoop her out some cold jellied dog food. It makes you wonder why she's so happy to see us all the time. Stockholm syndrome? ....sorry went off on my own little tangent there... back to your story... Loved the return of weird obsessive stalker Mason. We haven't seen him for a while. And I liked your little dig at Justin being a (very) part-time mechanic. Is he ever at that garage??!! 1 Quote
Guest Posted October 13, 2017 Report Posted October 13, 2017 Great chapter I liked the scenes from Buddy’s point of view and barking at his own reflection. Update again soon Quote
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