pembie Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) I have no doubt in my mind that this Kris Novotny isn't what he seems I have to agree with Brody that being with someone just isn't about having sex. The main point is firstly is that you both can stand each others company haha Oh and I have never been blown away by the sight of boobs either their quite odd things But I guess they are nice too Well not the really huge type Update to my comment I'm very sorry I got distracted by blabbering on about boobs I don't know Staillon Tamers in Caged and now this What am I like? Anyway here's what I wanted to say Very good job you have done of writing Brody in this very differnt way it gives his character very good depth and sets the scene well for this whole mystery. The fact he was found naked on the beach it gets you wondering why I could delete the first part of my comment but no lets leave it there for comedy value haha Edited June 26, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
bijou Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) Hey thanks for writing it amazing start the intrigue and interest in what happens next is there already I'm already hanging out for the next chapter like how you went into depth about Brody's thoughts and Justin and Tori were spot on Edited June 26, 2017 by bijou 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 Very intriguing start, with the cold opening leaving us wondering what's happened to Brody and then the flashback suggesting he may be asexual or something, which is an interesting take on what's often a very solitary character.Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Guest Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 Great chapter Poor Brody wondering what happened to him. The flashbacks suggesting Brody might be gay. Update again soon Quote
Ludub Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 12 hours ago, pembie said: Very good job you have done of writing Brody in this very differnt way it gives his character very good depth and sets the scene well for this whole mystery. The fact he was found naked on the beach it gets you wondering why 9 hours ago, bijou said: like how you went into depth about Brody's thoughts 6 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: the flashback suggesting he may be asexual or something, which is an interesting take on what's often a very solitary character. I've sometimes wondered about Brody. I'm very very behind with the show at the moment so I haven't seen any of his more recent 'relationships' but he's always struck me as someone who doesn't really show much attraction to anyone. His very brief fling with Jeannie seemed to come out of nowhere and was very exaggerated, almost as though he was overcompensating for something... (which I suppose he was, largely because the writers bottled it, and decided last minute that their first gay character was now going to be straight. It was a somewhat frantic U-turn for him, and very poorly written at that). I seem to remember Mason taunting him about his 'dry spell' and then him throwing himself like a maniac at the first pretty girl he saw. It came across as a very empty 'attraction'. I liked the idea of Brody being asexual. I think it kind of fits with his (as Red says) solitary character. Glad you like it. 12 hours ago, pembie said: I'm very sorry I got distracted by blabbering on about boobs I don't know Staillon Tamers in Caged and now this What am I like? Ah Pembie, you always make me laugh. Brody might not have had much interest in that waitress' boobs but it looks like you certainly did! 3 hours ago, Kristen said: Poor Brody wondering what happened to him. 6 hours ago, Red Ranger 1 said: Very intriguing start, with the cold opening leaving us wondering what's happened to Brody 9 hours ago, bijou said: amazing start the intrigue and interest in what happens next is there already I'm already hanging out for the next chapter Thanks! It is supposed to be a mystery so hopefully I'll keep you guessing for a while yet! Thanks for reading everyone! x Edited June 26, 2017 by Ludub 1 Quote
pembie Posted June 26, 2017 Author Report Posted June 26, 2017 (edited) 16 minutes ago, Ludub said: Ah Pembie, you always make me laugh. Brody might not have had much interest in that waitress' boobs but it looks like you certainly did! Ah sorry wasn't this the part that was meant to spike my interest? Was my interest spiked a bit too early here? Good of you to pinpoint where my attention was during this chapter.. That was very sharp of you to have notcied I'm glad you pointed it out to me Pun pun pun pun and its only the first chapter I wonder if I can keep it up all the way? Edited June 26, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 4 minutes ago, pembie said: I wonder if I can keep it up all the way? Hahahahahahaha! ???????? (sorry, very childish! ) Quote
bijou Posted June 26, 2017 Report Posted June 26, 2017 11 minutes ago, pembie said: Ah sorry wasn't this the part that was meant to spike my interest? Was my interest spiked a bit too early here? Good of you to pinpoint where my attention was during this chapter.. That was very sharp of you to have notcied I'm glad you pointed it out to me Pun pun pun pun and its only the first chapter I wonder if I can keep it up all the way? 5 minutes ago, Ludub said: Hahahahahahaha! ???????? (sorry, very childish! ) Just now, pembie said: Very stiffly put We will see I like reading your comments to each other you both manage to put a smile on face (in a positive way) 1 Quote
pembie Posted June 26, 2017 Author Report Posted June 26, 2017 3 minutes ago, bijou said: I like reading your comments to each other you both manage to put a smile on face (in a positive way) I'm glad its in a positive way I can't think of another way to be honest haha 1 Quote
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