pembie Posted October 7, 2017 Author Report Posted October 7, 2017 (edited) WARNING: VERY ADULT THEMES & SEXUAL CONTENT Yes but no red warning like normal naa teasing Anyhow very clever the way Brody's mind became so muddled with thinking himself as a vampire having to taste and foucus on his own blood to block out nasty Kris there.. Then for Brody to start his rampage of other victims Hunter became the hunted I spotted that For everyone to have a rich fruity spicy amoras to the tastes of their bloods like a wine tasting evening was very funny Brody has been on the largest Saturday night bender of his life and now his suffering from the biggest comedown hungover as he realises what his done. I do find this story and all your stories amusing they entertain me no end haha So I look forward to your next one. Edited October 7, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Ludub Posted October 7, 2017 Report Posted October 7, 2017 4 minutes ago, pembie said: WARNING: VERY ADULT THEMES & SEXUAL CONTENT Yes but no red warning like normal naa teasing Haha! I posted this on my phone and it wouldn't let me do the red font, lol! Surely, you lot have got the idea by now! 6 minutes ago, pembie said: Brody has been on the largest Saturday night bender of his life and now his suffering from the biggest comedown hungover as he realises what his done. Yeah, probably a bit hard to take. Imagine waking up in hospital to find out you'd gone a bit barmy and gone around attacking people.... and John Palmer thought he had it tough.... 8 minutes ago, pembie said: I do find this story and all your stories amusing they entertain me no end haha So I look forward to your next one. Thank you! I do enjoy writing them! 1 Quote
pembie Posted October 7, 2017 Author Report Posted October 7, 2017 4 minutes ago, Ludub said: Yeah, probably a bit hard to take. Imagine waking up in hospital to find out you'd gone a bit barmy and gone around attacking people.... and John Palmer thought he had it tough.... Bit barmy whats that a mild step down to only slightly bonkers? If this sort of thing can happen to someone who has a trained sister as a doctor and she can't spot the signs God help the rest of us Oh maybe I messed up my wording there a trained doctor not a trained sister haha 1 Quote
Inactive User Posted October 7, 2017 Report Posted October 7, 2017 Liked the ending to this fanfiction. Loved how Justin comforted Brody at the end. Thank you for sharing this story with us, Ludub 1 Quote
bijou Posted October 7, 2017 Report Posted October 7, 2017 Awesome story thanks for writing the ending was very fitting 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 8, 2017 Report Posted October 8, 2017 Wow! I was not expecting the story to end so quickly but it does kind of make sense and I guess once Brody was dragged back to reality there weren't too many places to go.(Knowing you though, I wouldn't have been surprised if it had been a double bluff.)The idea of it being a huge delusion to block out the rape is a nice idea.And if I thought I was a vampire, Hunter would be high on my list of people to bite as well. 2 Quote
Ludub Posted October 8, 2017 Report Posted October 8, 2017 38 minutes ago, Red Ranger 1 said: And if I thought I was a vampire, Hunter would be high on my list of people to bite as well. haha! I thought you might like that bit! lol! Glad you liked the ending. 1 Quote
Guest Posted October 9, 2017 Report Posted October 9, 2017 Great ending Poor Brody thinking he was a vampire and biting all those people. I look forward to your next story. Quote
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