Inactive User Posted June 29, 2017 Report Posted June 29, 2017 Great chapter Good thing that Brody was found Looking forwards to the next chapter Xx 1 Quote
bijou Posted June 29, 2017 Report Posted June 29, 2017 Great update you nailed the others not including Raffy in anything still no closer to finding out what happened to Brody I like that though it keeps the mystery going and leaves me wanting more 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Thanks everyone for the lovely comments! Really glad you're all enjoying it! On 28/06/2017 at 20:12, Red Ranger 1 said: Nice use of the Morgans' frustrating habit of leaving Raffy out of everything, although this time it's perhaps more understandable than some. Expand On 28/06/2017 at 21:41, Kristen said: Like Red said the Morgan's never tell Raffy anything. Expand On 29/06/2017 at 01:57, bijou said: you nailed the others not including Raffy in anything Expand It is a little bit annoying that they think they have to wrap her up in cotton wool all the time. She's not that young, and keeping her in the dark about stuff always seems to backfire... That said, maybe in these circumstances, it's the right decision? On 28/06/2017 at 20:12, Red Ranger 1 said: Hmm.Is Justin right in his suspicions about Brody?I can't think of any other explanation offhand, guess we'll have to see. Expand On 29/06/2017 at 01:57, bijou said: still no closer to finding out what happened to Brody I like that though it keeps the mystery going and leaves me wanting more Expand On 28/06/2017 at 22:07, pembie said: Last time Brody gets to have a family hmmmmmm very mysterious my intriging mind grows ever the spiker with wonder Expand Oh, I'm very pleased! I do want to keep you guessing! There are a couple of little clues in the previous chapters, but they might not be too obvious (hopefully) Don't worry though, it will all become clear... On 28/06/2017 at 22:07, pembie said: Oh forgot to say Mason was making a hell of meal out of that sandwich haha Expand Hahaha! Yeah, well, Mason always strikes me as very blase when it comes to family crises. I could see him munching his way through a sandwich while everyone else is panicking. He never seems too worried (when he really should be!) On 29/06/2017 at 01:38, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Good thing that Brody was found Expand Yeah, a big relief for everyone... but what was he doing while he was gone? Where did he go? That's the question! On 28/06/2017 at 22:07, pembie said: That poor dog he must feel like his legs are about to drop off the number of walks he gets Expand I know! Poor Buddy. He's probably thinking 'Uh-oh!... the humans are arguing again! ... but I've only just come back in!' Thanks for reading everyone! New chapter going up this evening (just doing a final read through!) 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Ohh boy. Brody is definitely in a serious situation here.Trying to force things was a bad idea but Kris should have listened when he wanted to stop.Well-written, intrigued to see where you go with it. 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 On 30/06/2017 at 20:31, Red Ranger 1 said: Ohh boy. Brody is definitely in a serious situation here.Trying to force things was a bad idea but Kris should have listened when he wanted to stop.Well-written, intrigued to see where you go with it. Expand Thanks Red! I spent a lot of time on this chapter so I'm glad you liked it I wanted to show Brody's inner conflict here. He's doing one thing and thinking something else entirely. It's like there's a war going on in his mind all the time, between wanting to be 'normal' and do what other people do, and the fact that he really just doesn't enjoy sex. And yes, Kris should have listened when he said 'stop'. He probably should learn to read the signs a little better too. Quote
Guest Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Great chapter Poor Brody. Kris really should of listened to Brody and stopped. Update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Great chapter Felt sorry for Brody Kris should have done the right thing-listening to him. Update soon please 1 Quote
pembie Posted June 30, 2017 Author Report Posted June 30, 2017 (edited) Its a good job I live on my own so I can do my blushing in private But really the nerves shouldn't have been spiked with that chapter Had to work my pun in there somewhere...And yes I had thought of it as soon as you told me your were nervous about this chapter haha Oh and Brody's been told he kisses like a letterbox I'm trying to work out if that is worse than kissing like a fish Well written and great story Edited June 30, 2017 by pembie 1 Quote
Ludub Posted June 30, 2017 Report Posted June 30, 2017 Thanks guys! Glad you enjoyed it! On 30/06/2017 at 21:55, Kristen said: Kris really should of listened to Brody and stopped Expand On 30/06/2017 at 22:02, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Kris should have done the right thing-listening to him Expand Very true Brody is sending out a lot of mixed signals, but he did say 'stop'. On 30/06/2017 at 22:56, pembie said: Its a good job I live on my own so I can do my blushing in private Expand Hahaha! It was a bit steamy, wasn't it?! Kinda to be expected in my stories though, lets face it! On 30/06/2017 at 22:56, pembie said: Oh and Brody's been told he kisses like a letterbox I'm trying to work out if that is worse than kissing like a fish Expand That's a hard one to answer! lol! Oh and thanks for the puntastic other part to your comment.... You're gonna run out of 'spike' puns eventually though! haha! Quote
pembie Posted June 30, 2017 Author Report Posted June 30, 2017 Puntastic I haven't used that one yet Don't count your chickens just yet I'm very sharp 1 Quote
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